So here's an example: "If children are taught to be good members of society, the world will be a better place."
给你们举个例子："If children are taught to be good members of society, the world will be a better place."（如果孩子们被教成了优秀的社会成员，世界会变得更好。）
So, it's in the first conditional, because we've got "if", then we've got the past simple, followed by a clause with "will".
这个句子用的是第一条件句，因为句子里有"if"，还有后接"will"从句的一般过去时。
You can use that conditional structure in your essay, in your conclusion, I think that's good because you're showing the examiner you know how to write conditionals.
你们在自己作文的结尾部分可以用这个条件句结构，我觉得这很不错，因为这能让考官看到你们会写条件句。
So, because these essays are marked on your style, but also your grammar when you're writing English, displaying a range of structures,
因为这些作文的评分不仅以你们的写作风格为标准，还要看你们用英语写作、展示一系列结构时的语法，
it's good to write this moral... moral or social observation in the conditional.
所以用条件句写道德观察评价或社会观察评价是个不错的方法。
So, that was the first way you can write a conclusion.
以上是你们写结尾时能用的第一种方法。
When we come back, I'm going to show you the second way you can write a conclusion for IELTS or CAE.
下面我会跟你们讲雅思或CAE考试的作文中能用来写结尾的第二种方法。
Let's have a look at the second way to write a conclusion for your IELTS or a similar discursive essay.
现在我们来看看雅思作文或类似的论述文中，你们能用来写结尾的第二种方法。
So, in this conclusion, we have a different structure to follow.
在这种结尾中，我们要遵循的结构跟上一个不太一样。
First of all, you can make a subjective opinion statement, what do I mean by "subjective"?
首先，你们可以写一个主观性观点的陈述句，“主观性”是什么意思？
That basically means using "I".
主要就是用"I"来陈述观点的意思。
As I mentioned, you should not really use: "I think", "I think", "I think" all the way through your essay,
我之前已经说过了，你们不能整篇作文从头到尾一直用"I think"，
but it's okay to use it just in the conclusion for impact.
但是为了效果只在结尾部分用是可以的。
Then you include the sentence or statement with: "The most important reason is", blah, blah, blah.
然后你们要在这个句子或陈述句中写上"The most important reason is..."（最重要的原因是......）
And then, again, you make a moral or social observation.
接下来，你们还是要写一个道德或社会观察评价。
And this time, if you want, you can use a second conditional, and I'll show you.
这一次，如果你们想的话，可以用一个第二条件句，我会告诉你们怎么写的。
So, let's have a look.
那我们来看看吧。
A subjective opinion statement: "I think parents should teach their children to be good members of society."
首先写一个主观性观点陈述句："I think parents should teach their children to be good members of society."（我认为家长应该教他们的孩子成为优秀的社会成员。）
So we're just taking... we're taking... you know, there are two sides to this question. There's:
这个题目有两个方面，所以我们只是选了......一方面是：
"Parents should teach their children to be good members of society",
“家长应该教他们的孩子成为优秀的社会成员”；
and there's: "School should teach their children to be good members of society", so now you just show us what you think.
另一方面是：“学校应该教孩子成为优秀的社会成员”，所以现在你们要告诉我们你们的看法。
"I think parents should teach their children to be good members of society."
比如"I think parents should teach their children to be good members of society."（我觉得家长应该教他们的孩子成为优秀的社会成员）。
That bit's done.
这部分搞定。