对话文本
A: The new webpage design is much more effective than before. I feel confident it will rope in a lot more business because of its user-friendly format.

B: Why do you think the new page is so much better than the old page? I thought the old page wasn't half bad....

A: The old page was okay, alright, but there wasn't a big influence in our sales volume, because the site wasn't developed with an eye towards the marketing aspect. Now it's different. We got our marketing department team in on the action, and the results are smashing....

B: What changes were made from the old page to the new page?

A: First, the visitors to the site are encouraged to give their contact information. They can sign up for a free monthly drawing. Once we've got their info, it goes into a database for future marketing mailers and advertising targeting. Also, there are clear links to descriptions of our products and services, so as to give confidence to new customers. We also added a specific area for on-line customer service.... So far we've gotten a ton of positive feedback....

B: Great!
参考翻译
新的网页设计比以前的效果更好了.由于该网页采用使用方便的板式,我有信心它能够揽来更多的生意.
为什么你认为新网页比旧网页要好得多?我过去认为旧网页也不错...
确实,旧网页也可以,但对我们的销售量没有太大的影响,因为网站开发没有着眼于市场销售这个方面.现在不同了,我们有销售部在发挥作用,而且结果好极了!
从旧网页到新网页做了什么改动?
首先是鼓励登陆网站的人留下他们的联系信息.他们能签约每月得到一张免费图画.一旦我们有了他们的信息,这些信息就进入未来销售邮寄对象和广告宣传目标的数据库.此外,为了让顾客对我们有信心,新网页上开通了我们产品和服务介绍的链接,我们还特别增加了网上顾客服务区...到目前为止,我们已经得到了大量的正面反馈信息.
太好了!
核心词汇
smashing:very good or enjoyable 非常好的；十分愉快的
We had a smashing time. 我们过得非常愉快。
You look smashing! 你看上去真棒！

feedback:advice, criticism or information about how good or useful something or somebody's work is 反馈的意见（或信息）
I'd appreciate some feedback on my work. 如果有人对我的工作提出意见我将感激不尽。
The teacher will give you feedback on the test. 老师会对你的测验提供反馈信息。
We need both positive and negative feedback from our customers. 我们需要顾客正反两方面的反馈意见。