托福口语点评批改附MP3 话题71:你愿意提前消费还是存钱消费?
日期:2014-12-27 09:57

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学生托福口语录音:如上音频。

口语题目:

Some people would borrow money to buy things they need. Others would save up money until they can afford it. Which do you prefer and why? Please include examples and details in your answer.

名师点评:
Comment forIndependent Task 1 or 2
Overall Score:23

评分标准:
1、Generalization:问题回答选择save money,论述的后半部分比较有说服力,语言运用也比较好,可以提前;论述中论据1的相关details有些牵强,论述不够充分。
2、Delivery:语速较慢,表述清楚。部分发音比较拖沓,需注意,例如,that
3、LanguageUse:语言句型和词汇运用较为一般。
4、TopicDevelopment:信息观点表述比较流畅。

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