托福口语点评批改附MP3 话题68:榜样如何影响你的生活
日期:2014-12-24 09:40

(单词翻译:单击)

学生托福口语录音:如上音频。

口语题目:

Describe a person that you look up to as a role model. Explain how this person has influenced your life. Include details and examples to support your response.

名师点评:
Comment for Independent Task 1 or 2
Overall Score:21

评分标准:
1、Generalization:论述You look up your previous English teacher as a role model 的理由充分,且较具有层次感。
2、Delivery:语速均匀,整体语音语调的表述较为清晰,但有部分单词发音错误会影响听者的理解。
例如:discussion 发音需要浊化。
3、Language Use:语言句型和词汇运用较为地道,表达方式基本清晰。
4、Topic Development:信息观点表述流畅。

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