2010年商务英语考试(BEC)高级写作范文(一)
日期:2010-11-12 08:17

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Report writing Ex 4: Sample answer: (235words)

  Reassessment of job satisfaction: Sue Pearson(PR Dept.)

  Introduction

  This report sets out to use Workset colours to assess the accuracy of my job description as PR officer and to suggest a number of changes.

  Findings

  It is clear that there is a difference between the way the company views the job and the reality as I perceive it. Firstly, a number of areas which demand a significant proportion of my time are not mentioned in the official job brief. The segment on the pie chart which provides most cause for concern is the pink sector; this relates to my attendance at a number of meetings which I can contribute little. Another significant area is the grey segment; this refers to the unscheduled time I spend sorting out computer problems. I feel these activities are hampering my core work. As can be seen from the pie charts, the time I spend actively working to meet the goals agreed with my line manager is less than envisaged.

  Conclusions

  The above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.

  Recommendations

  I would recommend that my official job brief should be updated using the Workset colours. It would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart and to investigate whether work in these areas could be carried out by someone else more suited to these tasks.

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重点单词
  • contributevt. 捐助,投稿 vi. 投稿,贡献,是原因之一
  • recommendvt. 建议,推荐,劝告 vt. 使成为可取,使受欢迎
  • assessv. 估定,评定
  • descriptionn. 描写,描述,说明书,作图,类型
  • segmentn. 部份,瓣,弓形 vt. 分割
  • samplen. 样品,样本 vt. 采样,取样 adj. 样
  • reassessmentn. 重新评估
  • coren. 果心,核心,要点 vt. 挖去果核
  • suevt. 控告,起诉 vi. 请求,追求,起诉
  • perceivevt. 察觉,感觉,认知,理解