专业八级改错练习第10期
日期:2009-06-03 17:42

(单词翻译:单击)

练习

【练习】

A great many cities are experiencing difficulties which are nothing new in the history of cities, except in their scale. Some cities have lost their original purpose and have not found new one. And any large or rich city is __1

going to attract poor immigrants, who flood in, filling with hopes of __2

prosperity which are then often disappointing. There are backward towns on the edge of Bombay or Brasilia, just as though there were on the edge of __3

seventeenth-century London or early nineteenth-century Paris. This is new is __4

the scale. Descriptions written by eighteenth-century travelers of the poor of Mexico City, and the enormous contrasts that was to be found there, are very __5

dissimilar to descriptions of Mexico City today—the poor can still be numbered __6

in millions.The whole monstrous growth rests on economic prosperity, but behind it lies __7

two myths; the myth of the city as a promised land, that attracts immigrants __8

from rural poverty and brings it flooding into city centers, and the myth of the __9

country as a Garden of Eden, which, a few generations late, sends them flood __10

-ing out again to the suburbs.

答案

【答案】

1. 在 new one 前加 a.

这里one指代上下文中的可数名词purpose,因此该词前要有限定词。

2. 将 filling 改为 filled.

在这里,非谓语动词fill与句子的who(poor immigrants)之间是逻辑动宾关系,因此要使用过去分词来表示被动意义。

3. 去掉 though.

4. 将 this 改为 what.

根据句子结构,我们可以看出这里需要一个关系代词,它既能引导主语从句,同时也可以在从句中作主语,这个关系代词就是what。如:What I like in a good author is not what he says,but what he whispers

5. 将 was 改为 were.

that引导定语从句,其先行词是descriptions…and the enormous contrasts,因此谓语动词be要用复数。

6. 将 dissimilar 改为 similar.

这里要表示的是“共同,相似”之处。

7. 将 lies 改为 lie.

behind it lie two myths 是个倒装句,主语为two myths,可见谓语动词要使用复数。

8. 将 that 改为 which.

这里是一个非限制性定语从句,因此不可用that,而要用which

9. 将 it 改为 them.

复数名词immigrants的代词,所以要用复数形式。

10 将late改为later

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重点单词
  • dissimilaradj. 不同的
  • scalen. 鳞,刻度,衡量,数值范围 v. 依比例决定,攀登
  • originaladj. 最初的,原始的,有独创性的,原版的 n. 原件
  • exceptvt. 除,除外 prep. & conj. 除了 ..
  • mythn. 神话
  • prosperityn. 繁荣,兴旺
  • disappointingadj. 令人失望的 动词disappoint的现在分词
  • povertyn. 贫困,贫乏
  • ruraladj. 农村的
  • enormousadj. 巨大的,庞大的