2015年5月9日雅思写作解析及语料库(新东方版)
日期:2015-05-11 18:15

(单词翻译:单击)

  2015年4月30日雅思写作解析及语料库
  环保类:
  Development in technology leads to environmental problems and some people think that the solution to these problems is for everyone to lead a simpler way of life, while others say that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 高科技发展导致环境污染,保护环境是要人们过简单生活还是依赖科技?
  作家立场:环保即要依赖高科技,还应该提倡人们过简单生活。
  雅思原创环保语料库:
  环保话题基本表达法:
  1. environmental protection = environmental preservation = environmental conservation = greenism n环境保护
  解析:greenism n. 绿色保护;环境保护
  2. environmentally friendly = eco-friendly adj 环保的……
  3. environmental protection awareness n环保意识
  4. ruin / damage / hurt the environment v破坏环境
  5. raise / enhance / boost environmental protection awareness amongst the general public v 提高全民环保意识
  词汇:amongst the general public 在公众之间
  6. environmental pollution = environmental contamination 环境污染
  环境恶化的危害和原因分析:
  1. traffic congestion = traffic jam n交通拥堵
  2. over-industrialization n过度工业化
  3. deforestation n 森林砍伐
  4. air and noise contamination / pollution n 空气和噪音污染
  5. the deterioration of air quality n 日益恶化的空气质量
  词汇:deteriorate v 使得恶化
  6. threaten public health and safety v威胁公共健康与安全
  环境污染解决途径:
  1. to utilize the natural resources properly v合理利用自然资源
  2. adopt environmentally friendly policy v采取环保政策
  3. exploit and popularize the use of eco-friendly power source v 研发和推广环保能源
  词汇:exploit v开发;利用;剥削
  4. Carrying out environmental publicity and education to enhance the whole nation's awareness of the environment. 开展环境宣传教育,提高全民族的环境意识
  5. To produce and popularize low-carbon and eco-friendly vehicles aiming to reduce contamination caused by the emission of exhaust gas. 生产和普及环保汽车,减少由于尾气释放带来的污染。
  雅思原创范文赏析:
  首段:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场
  Ironically, we, human beings, are now facing with a series of environment-related issues such as global warming or the depletion of resources. People differ greatly in their views as to how to protect the environment, to resort to the high-tech or to opt for a simpler lifestyle. To voice my opinion, the perfect combination of the two approaches will be the ideal way to resolve environment-related problems.
  二段:我的口吻支持正方观点:
  Indeed, plenty of evidence could be explored to justify that it works to safeguard our surroundings via high-tech. First, efforts should be made to explore and popularize new environmentally friendly energy sources to substitute those highly polluted fossil fuels. To illustrate, it is highly recommended to produce and popularize low-carbon and eco-friendly vehicles aiming to reduce contamination caused by the emission of exhaust gas. The use of fuel-cell-driven cars will pose less threat to the environment. Also, natural resources such as solar energy, sea energy, wind energy and tidal power could and should be applied to our normal life and production. Eventually, the effective recycle of resources could be realized if we can rely on the high-tech to classify and handle various rubbishes.
  三段:我的口吻支持反方观点:
  Yet, in addition to relying on high-tech, it is still feasible to call on people to live a simple and eco-friendly life. First, environmental pollution will be eased if less high-tech products are utilized in our life. For example, the public should be advocated to avoid driving private cars and take public transit, in this sense, it will diminish the waste of natural resources and minimize the use of fossil fuels. Further, people’s environmental protection awareness should be strengthened. To foster water-wise lifestyle, to economize electricity and to diminish the use of plastic bags could all serve as perfect examples. Last, people can also be encouraged to visit the beautiful places that are close to home, rather than traveling for long distance on holidays.
  尾段:再次亮明观点:
  Overall, I re-affirm my conviction that both living a simple life and relying on high-tech could play an indispensable part in the process of environmental preservation. Therefore, the combination of both methods is highly recommended.

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