2014年12月4日雅思写作解析及语料库
　　小作文：
　　曲线图：四个汽车厂汽车生产花费时间在1998-2005年间的变化。
　　大作文：
　　Some people say that it is better to teach language students in small classes, while others think that the number of students does not matter. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 有人认为教授语言小班授课效果更佳，有人认为外语学习，班级学员的数量不重要，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。
　　点评：两种观点讨论，新题出现，看似简单，考察头脑风暴。
　　作家立场：支持小班教授语言更加有优势。
　　思路拓展：
　　正方观点：
　　1. 小班授课可以因材施教，更多关照个体学员，因此效果更好。
　　2. 小班授课可以使更多学生有机会参加课程讨论，口语练习，因此效果更好。
　　3. 小班授课对于教师而言，更加容易组织丰富的课堂练习，例如排练英语剧，角色扮演，可以使每个学生参与其中，激发学习兴趣，开发学习潜能，树立学习自信。
　　反方观点：
　　1. 学习外语的成功教师为辅，个体学习者的内在驱动力为主，因此，大班小班授课，差异不大。
　　2. 外语学习的成功更多取决于教师的优秀程度，所谓名师出高徒，因此，只要教师优秀，即使班级学生较多，依然可以帮助更多学生成功地掌握外语。
　　原创范文赏析：
　　首段：背景介绍　+　作家立场
　　New language acquisition is one of the key words of education. A man fail to master perfect foreign language, many of us believe, is uncompetitive in the future job-seeking or career development. Under this circumstance, new language acquisition seems to become an inevitable trend. Speaking for myself, organizing small class is superior to educating language learners in a larger class in terms of helpings students to acquire a new language.
　　解析：in terms of 在……方面
　　解析：language acquisition 语言习得(语言学习)
　　二段：正方观点展开：三点理由
　　Virtually，a great many advantages can be gained via teaching foreign language learners in small class. The most glaring merit is that teachers could allocate more time and energy to providing each student with customer-tailored education because it is easier for educators to organize the class. Therefore, better teaching effect could be achieved. Also, more language learners could have access to getting involved in classroom seminar, oral pattern drills. To make the final point, as for language teachers, colorful and amusing mode of education, for example, role play or foreign language, play could be easily achieved. My personal experience could best justify my stand, I once studied French in a small class, there are only six students in our class, our teacher Jenifer could draw on various games，role play to kindle our interest，tap our potential and instill language learning confidence into our hearts. We learnt French just for fun.
　　三段：反方观点展开：二点理由
　　It is highly possible that some people remain suspicious of my stand. One opposite argument might be that the success of foreign language acquisition mainly derives from the internal impel of individual language learner rather than the efforts of teachers. In the sense, the scale of the class is not that important. Meanwhile, some people might still contend that exceptional educators cultivate elite students. In other words, the commendable way to acquire a new language is to learn from the best teachers. As long as the language instructors are excellent enough, students do stand the chances of mastering perfect language skills. Hence, there is no striking difference between teaching small class and organizing large class.
　　解析：acquire a new language 学习新语言
　　尾段：再次亮明观点+总结理由
　　In a nutshell, it is not an easy task to acquire foreign language，individual language learner has his or her unique preference for the scale of class. However, small-scaled teaching never fails to appeal me. I still insist that students should be encouraged to attend small class
　　全文点评：专业背景为外国英语学以及应用语言学，因此，关于第二外语习得的方法以及教学原理于我并非难事。本题看似简单，博取高分也非易事。主题明确，例证拓展，忠实情感，淡化模板，词汇变化，句型多变，依然是文本之追求。童鞋可学习背诵范文中喜爱的词汇以及短语。
　　原创语料库：
　　1. provide students with customer-tailored education 给学生提供量体裁衣的教育方式
　　2. language acquisition 语言习得
　　3. acquire new language 学习语言
　　4. kindle one’s study interest 点燃一个人的学习兴趣
　　5. tap one’s unlimited learning 开发一个人无限的学习潜能
　　6. indoctrinate confidence into one’ heat 帮助一人树立自信
　　7. role play 角色扮演
　　8. it is not an easy task to …… 做……绝非易事
　　9. the commendable way to do sth 做……的值得推荐的方式
　　10. A is superior to B A优越于B