2014年5月24日雅思写作题目：
　　Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. What are the reasons? How can we encourage young people to study?
　　原创范文赏析：
　　首段：背景介绍 +　写作目的
　　Alarmingly，there is a growing trend that the beginning of career indicates the end of academic study. Currently,plenteous people slacken their efforts at self-improvement and hold a negative attitude towards lifelong learning when stepping into society. This essay aims to investigate the reasons why so many people take less interest in updating their knowledge and then present my recommendations.
　　翻译：令人担忧的是，一种趋势就是事业的开始意味着学习生涯的结束。很多人放松努力，对于学习态度消极。本文目的皆在于探究下为何很多年轻人对于自身充电学习态度消极，再提出解决策略。
　　点评：文无定法;本文开篇没有写作问题的影响：
　　二段：原因的展开(客观上 + 主观上)
　　The underlying reasons why some school leavers hold cold attitudes towards study are manifold. Here, some of them will be explored. First, their indifferent attitude towards study can be mainly ascribed to ever-accelerating pace of modern life and heavy workload. Nowadays, numerous employees are too occupied to spend time in updating their knowledge. Further, the core of life has shifted from pursuing academic triumph to enjoying family life. More precisely, as for those who have got married and started career, they may think that it is better to take good care of family members and focus on work. Last, some relevant enterprises’ less emphasis on lifelong learning is also the root cause of modern people’s laziness in acquiring new knowledge.
　　翻译：企业新鲜人对于持续学习态度消极原因很多，文本探究一些根源。第一，快节奏的生活和繁重的工作压力是原因，很多人过于繁忙没有时间充电学习。第二，生活重心转移，人们不再追求学业成功，而是开始享受家庭生活，对于成家立业者来说，很多人认为照顾家庭和发展事业更加重要。第三，企业对于终生学习没有足够重视，这也是人们懒惰，疏远更新知识的根源。
　　点评：
　　core n核心;
　　get married and start career v 成家立业(推荐背诵)
　　update one's knowledge v 充电学习(推荐背诵)
　　三段：解决的策略;
　　Given the severity of people’s cold attitude towards learning, some feasible measures need to be taken. First, it is imperative for every individual to cultivate his or her study interest via partaking of training programs or self-study.Also, those enterprises are supposed to provide their staff with more study opportunities and reward the employees with competitive academic qualifications. To make the final point, mass media could publicize those who set fine examples for lifelong learning. Meanwhile, it works to advocate self-improvement and create academic atmosphere.
　　翻译：考虑到人们对于学习态度消极的严重性，应该采取一些措施。第一，个人通过参加培训课程和不断自修来培养学习兴趣很重要。第二，企业应该给员工提供学习的机会，奖励有更高的学历的员工。第三，媒体应该宣传学习的标杆，同时，提倡自我进步和创造良好的学习氛围很重要。
　　点评：it works to do sth 做……是起作用的
　　尾段：
　　Overall, it is no easy task to maintain the lifelong zeal of learning, yet, study is a lifelong enterprise. Only when the above-mentioned measures are adopted can youngsters build up the habit of constant self-improvement
　　翻译：保持终生学习的乐趣绝非易事，但是，学习是终生的事业，只有采取我提及的策略，年轻人才能建立终生学习的习惯。
　　点评：zeal = passion = enthusiasm n 热情