Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. What are the reasons? How can we encourage young people to study?
首段：背景介绍 + 写作目的
Alarmingly，there is a growing trend that the beginning of career indicates the end of academic study. Currently,plenteous people slacken their efforts at self-improvement and hold a negative attitude towards lifelong learning when stepping into society. This essay aims to investigate the reasons why so many people take less interest in updating their knowledge and then present my recommendations.
二段：原因的展开(客观上 + 主观上)
The underlying reasons why some school leavers hold cold attitudes towards study are manifold. Here, some of them will be explored. First, their indifferent attitude towards study can be mainly ascribed to ever-accelerating pace of modern life and heavy workload. Nowadays, numerous employees are too occupied to spend time in updating their knowledge. Further, the core of life has shifted from pursuing academic triumph to enjoying family life. More precisely, as for those who have got married and started career, they may think that it is better to take good care of family members and focus on work. Last, some relevant enterprises’ less emphasis on lifelong learning is also the root cause of modern people’s laziness in acquiring new knowledge.
get married and start career v 成家立业(推荐背诵)
update one's knowledge v 充电学习(推荐背诵)
Given the severity of people’s cold attitude towards learning, some feasible measures need to be taken. First, it is imperative for every individual to cultivate his or her study interest via partaking of training programs or self-study.Also, those enterprises are supposed to provide their staff with more study opportunities and reward the employees with competitive academic qualifications. To make the final point, mass media could publicize those who set fine examples for lifelong learning. Meanwhile, it works to advocate self-improvement and create academic atmosphere.
点评：it works to do sth 做……是起作用的
Overall, it is no easy task to maintain the lifelong zeal of learning, yet, study is a lifelong enterprise. Only when the above-mentioned measures are adopted can youngsters build up the habit of constant self-improvement
点评：zeal = passion = enthusiasm n 热情