2014年8月21日雅思写作解析以及原创范文
　　2014年8月21日雅思写作题目：
　　小作文：柱形图
　　大作文：To what extent do you think societies benefit from the contact and closer relationship with foreigners brought about by international business and tourism? 国际旅游业和国际商贸使国家之间联系增加，关系紧密，社会可从中受益，是否认同?
　　相关题目：
　　Today, more and more developing countries are expanding tourist industry. Why is it the case? Do you regard it as positive or negative? 为什么很多国家发展旅游业，你认为好还是不好?
　　Societies benefit from the increasing contact and closer relationship brought about from the international tourism and business. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 国际旅游业和国际商贸使国家之间联系增加，关系紧密，社会可从中受益，是否认同?(2010年6月17日旧题重现)
　　主题观点：国家商贸和国家旅游的发展对于国家的影响是利大于弊
　　原创范文：
　　首段：背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场
　　Over the past several decades, the growth of international trade has helped different nations to strengthen the relationship. Meanwhile, it seems to be an unavoidable trend that a number of countries, especially those enjoy abundant tourism resources, have been supporting and exploiting sightseeing industry. However, perhaps nothing has received more praise and abuse than the prosperity of the international trade and tourism. Personally speaking, the frequent contact and intimate relationship brought about by the international tourism and business could benefit every community in more ways than one.
　　点评：
　　1. it seems to be an unavoidable trend that …… 这似乎是一种不可避免的趋势
　　2. perhaps nothing has received more praise and abuse than …… 也许没有什么像……一样毁誉参半
　　3. in more ways than one 在很多方面
　　二段： 国际商贸和国际旅游繁荣的利好：
　　Seen from the positive perspective, international trade greatly conduces to all participants. More precisely, the booming international trade can perfectly integrate different countries’ resources, which helps many nations to share resources to achieve the goal of complementing each other's strengths. Likewise, the prosperity of international tourism has benefited many nations and every individual traveler. To be more specific, the development of global tourism could generate immense economic value. South Africa could serve as a perfect example, which used to poverty-stricken and less well-known place. As tourism booms, it now becomes one of the most eye-catching scenic spots. When tourists do their sightseeing, they will buy local souvenirs, dine in restaurants and seek hotels, hence, the prosperity of tourism spurs national economy and creates job opportunities. As for every individual, the closer relationship among different countries provides them with a golden chance to savor happiness, expand mind and enjoy life.
　　点评：
　　1. The booming international trade can perfectly integrate different countries’ resources, which helps many nations to share resources to achieve the goal of complementing each other's strengths 国际贸易的繁荣整合了不同国家的各种资源，使资源共享，实现了优势互补。
　　2. When tourists do their sightseeing, they will buy local souvenirs, dine in restaurants and seek hotels, hence, the prosperity of tourism spurs national economy and creates job opportunities. 游客观光的时候，购物，餐饮，住宿，因此，旅游业的繁荣可以刺激经济发展以及创造就业机会。
　　3. to savor happiness, expand mind and enjoy life 品味生活，开拓视野以及享受人生
　　三段：国际贸易和国际旅游繁荣的潜在弊端：
　　It is certainly true that the downsides of developing international tourism or business should never be ignored. For one thing, when it comes to tourism, million of flowing sightseers might trigger a series of destruction of the natural environment of those hot scenic spots. For another, cultural taboo induced by the prosperity of tourism may aggravate the conflicts between locals and visitors and even causes some frauds and hostilities. On the side of the international trade, the fierce competitions deriving from foreign countries might impose an economic burden on state-owned enterprises. Even worse, international speculations and risks invariably ensue.
　　点评：
　　1. trigger a series of destruction of the natural environment of those hot scenic spots. 对于热门旅游景区的自然环境造成一系列破坏
　　2. cultural taboo induced by the prosperity of tourism 旅游业发展带来的文化禁忌
　　3. cause some frauds and hostilities. 引起一些欺诈行为以及敌意
　　4. impose an economic burden on state-owned enterprises 对于国有企业带来经济压力
　　5. international speculations and risks invariably ensue.国际投机行为和国际风险不可避免地随之而来
　　尾段：
　　In closing, the development of the international trade and tourism can be a double-edged weapon, which can be used for equally good or evil. My stand is that global tourism and trade can promote a nation’s development in many respects so long as some proper managements, regulations and guidance can be ensured.
　　点评：
　　1. can be a double-edged weapon, which can be used for equally good or evil ……是一把双刃刀，可以为利，可以为害
　　2. in many respects = in many aspects = in more ways than one 在很多方面
　　3. so long as …… can be ensured 只要……可以得到保证
　　全文点评： 8月21日写作题目为旧题重现，角度较冷。对于童鞋而言，写作有难度，题干中的国际贸易和国际旅游都要在论证的时候有所涉及，这对于头脑风暴是一种考验，而国际贸易和国际旅游利弊的相关语料库在现场写作需要一定的英语实力。原创范文刻意使用了一些经典衔接词汇，推荐考生背诵使用。
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