2014年3月15日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文
日期:2014-08-11 09:27

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写作题目与分析

写作题目:

2014年3月15日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文

It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces like squares and parks, do you agree or disagree?

写作题目分析:

考題:
It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces like squares and parks: do you agree or disagree?
考情分析:
关于社会空间的话题。社会类话题2013每个月都会涉及1-2题,2014延续了这种特征,到目前为止,社会话题1月出现1次,关于年轻人跳糟;2月出现2次,关于贫富差距和成功的标准;3月到目前为止出现2次,关于大城市生活,今天出现了关于是否增加社会公共空间的题目。关于社会类,特别是社会新现象 的话题,在本年度将会不断出现。
审题要点:
第一个问题,抓住题干关键词Large Public Space, 围绕它展开讨论。最好能集中在Large上更为切题,因为饭店等其他不怎么Large的地方也属于公共一部分。
思路分析:(仅供参考)
建议写法:基本同意
开头:简单引入话题
第二段:社会大公共空间带来很多好处。
WHY:因为现在人生活的空间越来越小,和大自然接触的机会越来越少。
WHAT:
1、对普通个人:有很多休闲/交朋友/运动等的地方(老人,小孩,上班族)
2、对当地政府:是标志性建筑,可以提升城市形象和知名度。比如······
3、对经济:可以促成某些广场经济的发展。
第三段:HOWEVER
缺点可以从社会治安、环境保护、政府压力等来展开。

结尾:总之是好的政策。

写作参考范文

参考范文:

"claustrophobia"is recently a word that is no stranger to the people living in big cities: which describes a newly found psychological disease. People who have “claustrophobia? usually find it depressed and unbearable to stay in a confined place for a long time due to different reasons. Hov.-everr the problem is that most of us do have to stay indoor(officeT workshop, classroom, etc.) for the most of the time of the life. Therefore: it is of great necessity to welcome more large public places like parks and squares where the citizens can get close to the nature and get rid of the pressure in working or studying time.
The large public spaces: first and foremost: provide a regular wa.y for the local people to do things of all kinds more than their work. Sporting like jogging or playing badminton, which cannot usually be realized indoor: v.-ill certainly become one of the best choice for the young and old in spare time to get refreshed after a whole dav:s heavy workload. Additionally, parks、vi_t_h plants are also somewhere for people to have a bite to eat during the break while they are busv: probably meeting someone interesting. Last but not the least, establishing as many as those large public places: the image of the city is will be laddered up for the garden is no doubt to be carefully attended. It should be al'vays cherished for the city people to have more green plants.
However, it does not mean those places are without any disadvantages. A recent case centered on the riot instigated by a gang of terrorists in the commercial street of Changsha: leading to several death. It is always those densely populated public places that become the target of terrorists.
In conclusion, it is a great policy for governments to set up as many large public places as possible.

Meanwhhile: they should also make sure that the precaution work has alreadvbeen done.

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重点单词
  • pressuren. 压力,压强,压迫 v. 施压
  • confinedadj. 幽禁的;狭窄的;有限制的;在分娩中的 v. 限
  • conclusionn. 结论
  • necessityn. 需要,必需品,必然
  • spareadj. 多余的,闲置的,备用的,简陋的 v. 抽出,饶
  • depressedadj. 沮丧的,降低的,不景气的,萧条的,凹陷的,扁平
  • populatedadj. 粒子数增加的 v. 居住于…中;构成…的人口(
  • disagreev. 不一致,有分歧,不适应,不适宜
  • psychologicaladj. 心理(学)的
  • commercialadj. 商业的 n. 商业广告