写作题目与讲解

写作题目：

2014年2月15日雅思大作文写作真题TASK2
Some people think the main reason for success is hard work and determination.
While other peple think factors like money and personal appearance are also important.
Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

题目讲解：

Some people think success In Ilfe comes from hard work and determination, but others think ther© are more Important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
文章思路：
单边支持者观点：决心和努力决定成功
引言：引出话题，陈述观点
正大1:决心是动力。乔布斯坚持自我，即使被公司驱逐仍不放弃。最终达到无可比肩的成就。
正文2:光有决心还不行，还要有努力。真正有决心的人都是努力工作的。爱迪生无数次试验后才得到制造灯泡的最佳材料。有这种心态的人还会为计划周详做详细的准备，这有利于目标的实现。
正文3:钱和样貌与成功与否关系不大。马云既不好看, 家境也不好，但却创立了足以与电商巨头亚马逊比肩的阿里巴巴。虽然钱和样貌会让让人们起步更容易，但那样人们很容易会过于依赖这些从而丧失了努力的动力。
结论：成功取决于决心有多坚定和工作有多努力，而不是钱和相貌。

参考范文

参考范文：

What help people achieve success has always been critically argued. In my opinion, the role played by hard work and determination Is key, while money and appearance can be counterproductive to personal development.

Determination functions as a powerful drlvo to those who desire success. To take Stev© Jobs as an example, with the ambition to eliminate the barrier between people by means of technology, he persistently dedicated himself to the design of an Id©玫丨 machln©，even when h© was outcast by his colleague. The world finally saw his unparalleled success, when he cam© back with IPhone and MacBook that became a global cra2e.

Without hard work, however, a determination Is In vain. Therefore, It Is not unusual to find evidence of great personalities who undertook painstaking work, bearing In mind a determined goal. Tomas