2013年2月2日雅思写作范文
日期:2013-02-05 17:24

(单词翻译:单击)

  小作文:4个柱图,the bar chart show the percentage of male and female students getting grades(A and B)by subject area in 1996 and 2000.

  写作思路:

  按照4个图的顺序写4段,结论段比较所有图的异同。

  每个图既有趋势又有两者对比。

  大作文:

  Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.

  写作分析:

  参考过去出现的相关题目可以帮助同学们更好地解题:

  2008.01.10 TV/ video/ computer games: Good or bad

  2008.05.10 Children watch tv: at home VS school

  2009.05.16 Imagination and language skills: Read books Vs watch TV

  2013.01.05 2009.05.16

  2010.03.27 children more Tv, less activities, why? measures?

  2010.09.25 Too much TV for children, How affect? What measures?

  2010.11.04 Parents read for children Vs free choice on TV/internet/books

  2007.12.15 Disasters & violence on TV: why, effects?

  2007.11.17 Ads aimed at children should be banned?

  第一段:看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动,有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾

  第二段:看电视太多的消极面

  1对身体健康不利

  2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流

  3 对智力发展不利

  4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子

  第三段:适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展

  1 增加知识,和探索世界的兴趣

  2 丰富课余生活

  3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动

  第四段:适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目,并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展,否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。

  Watching TV has always been an important part of after school life for children, and some of them even become TV addicts. Therefore some people advocate "no TV for children".

  Of course this is understandable. Firstly, children sitting too much time in front of a screen tend to have poor eyesight and weak body due to lack of physical exercise. They can also be lost in the virtual world and be insensitive to people around them, including their parents, and this is detrimental to their family relationship and their emotional development. Another concern is about their mental development which needs various types of interactive activities, but obviouslyexcessive TV viewing cannot meet such requirement. The worst part can be some programs which are not proper for children to watch. Too many advertisements and news focusing on emergency and disasters on the screen are also a disadvantageous point for immature people who are prone to be influenced negatively.

  However watching TV in moderation with proper parental supervision can be good for children. There are plenty of educational programs which can expand children's knowledge and spark their interestin exploring the world where they may not have the opportunity to visit in real life, such as the nature and wild life. TV is not only an educational source, but is also a recreational activity. It can help enrich their after class activities. For example, children are always excited to watch cartoons and they would experience the adventure together with the characters in the show. The positive effects would be enlarged if children are able to share their TV time with their parents or peers, because they would have topics in common and more communication can be followed.

  In general, I'd like to conclude that whether TV is good or bad is determined by how parents manage it. If parents limit TV hours and designate some educational and interesting programs and they keep their children accompanied, healthy viewing habit would be established and positive effects would be maximized. Otherwise, watching TV can be a worrying situation.

  词汇拓展:

  1. Addict 上瘾的人

  2. advocate 提倡

  3. virtual world 虚拟世界

  4. insensitive 麻木

  5. detrimental 有害的

  6. concern 担心

  7. excessive 过度的

  8. immature 不成熟

  9. be prone to = be likely to 易于

  10. spark their interest激发兴趣

  11. supervision 监督

  12. in moderation 少量

  13. recreational 休闲的

  14. adventure 冒险经历

  15. is determined by 由…决定

  16. keep …accompanied 陪伴

  17. Otherwise 否则

  18. Maximize 最大化

  19. Designate 指定

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重点单词
  • establishedadj. 已被确认的,确定的,建立的,制定的 动词est
  • communicationn. 沟通,交流,通讯,传达,通信
  • sparkn. 火花,朝气,情人,俗丽的年轻人 vi. 闪烁,冒火
  • proneadj. 俯卧的,易于 ... 的,有 ... 倾向的
  • tendv. 趋向,易于,照料,护理
  • emotionaladj. 感情的,情绪的
  • screenn. 屏,幕,银幕,屏风 v. 放映,选拔,掩蔽,遮蔽
  • opportunityn. 机会,时机
  • determinedadj. 坚毅的,下定决心的
  • immatureadj. 不成熟的