2014年7月26日雅思写作解析以及原创范文
　　Task one: 表格图：
　　原创表格图模板：
　　首段：
　　The given table illustrates a breakdown of ……，in general ……
　　点评：
　　句型引导，表述图表信息，概括图表明显信息：
　　illustrate v 图表描述……
　　breakdown n数据分类（特别适合表格题）
　　二段：
　　Consulting from the given chart, it is clear that ……， …… by contrast ……，again，after comparison, it seems that ……， what noteworthy is that ……
　　点评：
　　小作文可以横向对比，纵向对比，分类对比，数据比较可从最大数据对比写作最小数据，数据的相等，倍数，一半为特殊点，需要特殊强调。
　　after comparison, it seems that ……经过对比，似乎是……（经典衔接词）
　　what noteworthy is that ……值得注意的是…… (经典衔接词)：
　　三段：
　　Overall，……
　　2014年6月27日雅思写作回忆：
　　Task two：环保类：
　　Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that the problems cannot be solved unless individuals take some actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion？有人认为环境问题个人无法负责，有人认为环境问题不能被解决除非个人采取行动，讨论两种观点，给出你意见（再次原题压中；请对比6－8月宏观预测30题）
　　点评：2014年7月26日雅思小作文考察遗漏的表格图，大作文考察个人环保如何作为（意料之中，情理之中），7月26日小范围预测15题和6-8月宏观预测30题全部原题压中。环保类作为雅思写作一类重点，历年重复考察。每次强化写作都会分享个性原创范文和语料库，相信关注网雅思频道以及背诵语料库的童鞋们今天定能博取高分。
　　Many people think it is very important to protect environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why does it happen? How to solve this problem? 不少人认为保护环境重要, 但是没有行动. 为什么? 如何解决?（见前博文）
　　点评：该文重点论证的就是环保个人不作为的原因以及环保个人如何作为。7月26日雅思题目应该论证的就是个人环保如何作为，语料库和思路拓展融会贯通。
　　The environmental problem in the world can not be solved by ordinary people, and governments and large companies should be responsible for this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 环境问题个人是无法解决的，只有企业和国家才能解决，是否同意？
　　点评：预测的该题目和7月26日考试题目前部分完全相同，提问角度相同，只是把是否同意观点改成了两种观点讨论。
　　原创范文：
　　首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场：
　　Ironically，we, human beings, are now facing a series of environment-related issues ranging from various contamination to global warming to the depletion of natural resources although our economy keeps on prospering. As to how to address environmental issues, an opinion seems to enjoy great popularity that personal efforts are too trivial to optimize our living surroundings, however, the issue is surely relevant to each individual citizen. （67）
　　翻译：具有讽刺意味的是，尽管我们的经济在不断繁荣，我们人类却面临着一系列和环保相关的问题，诸如各种污染，全球变暖和自然资源的消耗。关于如何解决环境污染，有人倾向于认为个人努力实在微不足道，不能改善我们的生存空间，但是，环境问题和每个公民息息相关。
　　词汇点评：
　　1. environment-related issues = environmental problem n环境污染：
　　2. alarmingly adv令人担忧的是 ……
　　3. ranging from 从……到……
　　4. an opinion seems to enjoy great popularity that …… 有人认为（物称表达代替人称表达）
　　二段：第一次支持作家立场，个人环保如何作为以及细节的展开
　　No matter how small personal involvement in environmental conservation might be, it is the unshakable obligation of every individual to safeguard the environment. The amelioration of the environment should and could be realized by every kind of little effort. A number of examples might justify my stand, instead of depending on private cars excessively, the public should be inspired to take public transit, walk on foot or ride bicycles, which could mitigate the pollution induced by public transport. Imaginably, we could enjoy a cleaner and quieter environment if there are few vehicles on the roads. Meanwhile, provided that we have to utilize personal cars, it is highly recommend that we should purchase and drive compact cars or full-cell-driven cars. (119)
　　翻译：无论个人努力在环保中显得多么微小，保护环境是每个人不可推卸的责任。改善环境个人应该也能够付出哪怕是微小的努力，很多例子可以支持我的立场，我们应该鼓励公众做公共交通工具，步行或者骑自行车，而不是过度依赖私家车。 可以想象，如果路上交通工具减少，我们可以享受更加干净和安静的环境。同时，假如我们不得不使用私家车，我们也应该购买小排量汽车或者电瓶环保车。
　　词汇点评：
　　1. environmental conservation = greenism = environmental protection n 环境保护
　　2. safeguard the environment = improve the environment v 保护环境
　　3. amelioration of the environment n环境的改善
　　4. public transit = public transport n 公共交通工具
　　5. full-cell-driven cars n电瓶驱动车
　　三段：第二次支持作家立场，个人环保如何作为以及细节的展开。
　　Also, raising the environmental protection awareness and fostering eco-friendly lifestyle should be advocated among every individual. More precisely, we could reduce the frequency of use of paper and do more on-line reading, we could visit places of interest close to home instead of traveling far away to remote tourist attractions and we could save electricity and cherish water such as turning on the air conditioning only when we have to, or turning off water tap tightly.（75）
　　翻译：第二，每个人应该提高环保意识以及培养环保的生活方式，具体而言，我们可以阅读电子书籍不是纸媒书籍，我们可以周边游不是长途游，我们可以节水节电。例如，少开空调，拧紧水龙头。
　　词汇点评：
　　1. raising the environmental protection awareness v提高环保意识
　　2. fostering eco-friendly lifestyle v培养环保生活方式
　　3. places of interest = tourist attractions n旅游目的地
　　4. turn off water tap tightly v拧紧水龙头
　　四段： 让步不同意观点的合理性 + 加以反驳
　　Granted, I have to admit that some severe environmental pollution, such as global warming or sea contamination, might fail to be resolved only by personal effort. In this sense, the role of governments in environmental management is challenging but inescapable because the government is the only legalized institution that may formulate legislations related to environmental problems. However, I want to rebut that without the cooperation, participation, and honest hard work of every individual, every governmental policy relating to greenism will end up becoming useless and meaningless. （86）
　　翻译：我承认，一些严重的环境污染问题，例如全球变暖，海洋污染，也许不能完全由个人努力解决，因此，政府在环境治理的中的责任是很有挑战性的，但是，又是不可推卸的，因为政府是唯一合法的机构可以立法保护环境，但是，我想要反驳的是，没有每个人的参与，合作，努力，每一项与环保相关联的政府政策最终会是既无意义，又不起作用。
　　词汇点评：
　　1. greenism n环境保护（来自雅思阅读）
　　2. legalized institution n立法机构
　　3. formulate legislations v制定政策
　　4. end up becoming useless and meaningless. v变得无意义无作用（句型为考官满分作文句型）
　　尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由
　　Overall，I re-affirm my stand that no matter how tiny personal efforts might be, they still work. After all, governmental policy depends on the implementation of every eco-friendly person. The earth is our shared home and every one of us should assume the responsibility of safeguarding it, not only for ourselves but also for the later generations.（58）
　　翻译：
　　总之，我的立场是，个人努力无论多么微小，在环保中依然重要，政府的策略也要靠环保的公民来执行，地球是我们的共同的家园，我们应该承担保护它的责任，不仅仅是为了我们自己，也是造福子孙后代。
　　全文点评：文无定法，原创范文只是雅思写作范文之一种。全文摈弃模板，自由写作。该文主题明确，逻辑清晰，论证饱满，词汇精准多变，摒弃华丽文风，仅用亮点词汇点缀。应该是7.5分以上的高分范文。2014年8月2日雅思写作小范围调整版预测15题近期由官网雅思频道首发。