BRYSON: Well.Amina,thanks for letting me have your draft in such good time.

AMINA: Oh,that's alright.I was just very anxious to hear what you think of it.You can see that I decided to change the topic - I had been interested in looking at Barings Factory.

BRYSON: Oh,I think the hospital was a much better choice.In fact...well...I have to say that I thought it was good.

AMINA: Oh?

BRYSON: There's still lots of work to be done...

AMINA: Oh yes...of course.

BRYSON: But there's plenty of good ideas.It opens well and the first chapter is fine but the middle section really stood out for me...most interesting.

AMINA: That's amazing because I really didn't find it a bit casy to write...

BRYSON: How long did you work on the whole thing?

AMINA: Well,I spent about two or three weeks reading and doing general research and then I dashed the writing off very quickly...so about four weeks in all.

BRYSON: Well,that's aboout par for the course.You've got a while yet to make the changes.

AMINA: Oh right...no problem...