【隐形模板】是假想的英文作文格式layout可用可不用。写作是抽象的文学不是精密的科学，相同之处是二者必须要有逻辑。谢振礼老师并不坚持论说文一定要写18句，只是考虑到多写几句怕是时间不够，而少写几句又怕字数不足。面临雅思或托福的大作文考试，候选人的写作速度极为重要。把作文简单化的优势可以赢得分分秒秒去对付英文的用语用句用字。作文是千篇一律，还不是主题结构内容。英文看来千变万化，其实规矩是清清楚楚，明明白白。先把作文格式摆平，方有余力应付英文的使用，力求循规蹈矩不逾矩。

果然十天可以突破英文作文？只用十天就能突破的作文部分，其实十分钟也照样办得到。突破不了的是英文。写作单项培训师普遍偏向传授众所皆知的作文技巧，忽视了基本的英文造句练习。国际英语测验的单项平均成绩最落后的是英文作文。既不如口语，又不如听力，更不如阅读能力。好消息是写作分数也是最有提升的空间。谢振礼老师的建议是重英文轻作文。作文是常识而英文非常识。

为了提高烤鸭对于英文造句的兴趣，特别提供四篇谢振礼原创范文作为磨练造句的参考。作文平常道：逻辑心图，定位四段，装配18句。英文非常道：全靠自己练其道，敢写为赢，勤写则精。

2 篇英文范文

1. IELTS——核能 Going Nuclear
2. IELTS——广告 Advertising
核能之利弊冲突
The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear energy overweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

谢振礼雅思范文 Example Essay 3-6-6-3：
圆形逻辑——四段定位——18句装配

【起三句】范围由宽而窄，起中有合
1. The sense of doom across the world today is not a fear of nuclear power but a fear of war because nuclear weapons have enlarged the mechanism of war by threatening to kill more people more secretly and more horribly than those of the past. 申论主题

2. Considering that there is no way to outlaw a war, the only alternative is to go nuclear in the hope that nuclear weapons hidden in stock somewhere serve to maintain world peace by theory of counter-attack. 集中焦点

3. And yet, going nuclear serves the purpose of energy supply, and as such the classic question arises: "to be or not to be?" 一分为二

【承六句】
4. Being cheap and clean, nuclear energy is a solution to an energy crisis at a time when other forms of generating energy are facing limits. 招牌句来自起段第三句，回到合段第16句。

5. Already power plants have been in operation in a number of countries.

6. These are successful examples to be followed, despite the fact that a few isolated incidents did happen, including a recent one in Japan's Fukushima area overwhelmed by tsunami.

7. Now that more advanced nuclear technology is supposed to keep power plants safe from damage, it should come as no surprise that more nuclear facilities are being built for peaceful use.

8. In all appearances, the fear of war is overcome by the need for economic development.

9. Many people are convinced that the benefits of nuclear power will outweigh the drawbacks in the long run.

【转六句】
10. Regardless of the fear of a nuclear war, there is no turning back from being engaged in nuclear development for peace or otherwise. 招牌句来自起段第3句，回到合段第16句。

11. It depends on the feeling of mutual trust on the international front to ensure lasting peace.

12. Fortunately, there seems to exist an agreement that nuclear weapons should be the last thing to be thought of as a means to win a war because there would be no winner in any nuclear conflict.

13. If anything goes wrong, the scale of destruction on human lives and civilization is beyond imagination.

14. The nightmare of Hiroshima remains vivid memory.

15. But so what?

【合三句】范围由窄而宽。合中有起。
16. To sum up, whether going nuclear is good or bad, or something in between, depends on who you ask. 二合为一. 收回两个招牌句4+10=3=16

17. In spite of reasonable fear for a nuclear war, nuclear know-how is not warlike, but rather a by-product of a warlike society. 还原焦点

18. And the world must seize it for good--for peaceful use forever. 重申主题
广告的利弊
Some people think that advertising is good for economy while others say it can cause peope to desire something unnecessary or completely useless. What is your opinion?

【起】起中有合。前呼合段。议论范围由宽而窄。

1 申论主题。主题=真题+你的立场

These days it is easy to find faults with advertising, and yet none can deny entirely that this art of persuasion is good for economy.

2 集中焦点。焦点=你的立场对别的立场

By circulating information mixing half truth with half lying, advertising can nevertheless penetrate the public mind with desires even for something worthless.

3 一分为二。分割=承4加转10=合16

All told, however, advertising is doing more good than evil.

【承】来龙起段。去脉合段。证明立场，支持主题。

4. 招牌之一。来自起3，去往合16。

To think that advertising is bad is understandable, and indeed there seems to be a common perception growing increasingly negative.

5. Perhaps history will see advertising as one of the real evil factors of modern time because it is stimulating people to constantly want things; want this and want that.

6. It is true that many consumers are convinced to spend money they do not have for things they really do not need.

7. It is also true that the high sales of popular consumer goods is a reflection of the power of advertising rather than the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

8. That kind of "impulsive buying" as consumer behavior can easiely turn need into greed.

9. Apart from misleading people to desire something not necessary or completely useless, advertising is surrounding them nearly everywhere and anytime on the point of boring them to death.

【转】来龙起段。去脉合段。证明立场。支持主题。

10. 招牌之二。来自起3，去往合16。

The good news is that advertising serves market economy well, thanks in part to such media outlets as television, radio, newspapers, magazines and the Internet.

11. Through the media, particularly television, advertising gives people a chance as consumers.

12. People are told about new products and services that improve their lives.

13. In fact, economy is at its best when the advertising industry is booming, imagining that when people are starving and freezing there would be no advertising whatever to sell food and fuel.

14. Thus, advertising holds a mirror to an affluent society in a virtuous cycle benefitting many sectors.

15. Logically more advertising means more money to all media outlets, which in turn boosts more sales, which in turn pushes more production and creates more jobs and therefore more buying power.

【合】合中有起。后应起段。议论范围由窄而宽。

16. 二合为一。结合=承4+转10=合16=起3

Those who think that advertising is evil must think again about the value of a market system that thrives on economic prosperity.

17. 还原焦点。你的立场+别的立场=焦点

Contrary to common belief, it seems that consumers do not actually hate advertising because of their own foolish desires.

18. 重申主题。真题+你的立场

The are aware that probably half the money they spend on advertising is wasted, without knowling clearly which half.