From: Olive HR Manager To: All staff
Date: 12 June, 2008 Subject: Appointment of Francisco
Here we announce the appointment of Mrs. Francisco as our new Sales Manager of the Headquarter. She will be starting her job next Monday morning. There will be a small welcome party by 9:00 that day so everyone please be on time.
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TO: All employees
FROM: PR Manager
SUBJECT: Welcome new marketing manger
Ms Francisca is appointed to the marketing manager of our company for her rich experences and excellent performance for many years.
Since the marketing department is so important for our company,Ms Francisca should start to work as early as possible. Tomorrow, she will come and in charge of this department .
As a way to express our welcome, every member is required to gather togather  at 8 o'clock in the hall of the company and wait for the coming of Ms Francisca. Don't be late !
口语化明显。改为：Please be sure to come on time.
To all staff
All members, today I want to give a announcement. You will have a new sals manager, Mrs. Francsisc . She will take the duty on next Monday. And you will be fond of her because she is easy to please. So you must be ready to welcome the lady .
to all staff
attentiong please,ms Francis which is new sales manager will come to here on 8:00 pm 7,6,2008, so that time all of you should give her a big welcome.
From Human resources manager
To All employees,
I am very pleased to announe  the appointment of Ms Fransica as our new sales manager at head office. She will be officially on board from Aug.01.2008. Please join me to give her the warmest welcome. Thank you!
From Mr Wu 
To all the staff of HQ：
Aftering serious consideration and consultation，we decide to appoint Mrs.Francisco  the sales manager of HQ. She is expected to start her new work next Monday. we will give her a short welcome meeting then，so all of you please make a preparation for it.
From Mike，HR manager