托福口语点评批改附MP3 话题75:怎样看待你的榜样?
日期:2014-12-31 10:06

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学生托福口语录音:如上音频。

口语题目:

Describe a person that you look up to as a role model. Explain how this person has influenced your life. Include details and examples to support your response.

名师点评:
Comment for Independent Task 1 or 2
Overall Score:17

评分标准:
1、Generalization:论述You kook up your best friend as a role model 的理由充分,但是没有层次感。
建议:分2-3个点来表述自己的理由。例如:Firstly,... Secondly,...笼统的说一堆,给人条理不清晰的感觉~
2、Delivery:语速有些断断续续,整体语音语调的表述较为生硬,需要整体纠正发音哦~。
例如:just,that,study 发音需要纠正。
3、Language Use:语言句型和词汇运用有所欠缺,表达方式不够流畅,但有一定的句法错误。
例如:he tell me that ...不符合语法,改为:he told me that...
4、Topic Development:信息观点表述不流畅。

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