托福口语点评批改附MP3 话题55:你怎么花钱?
日期:2014-12-12 09:08

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学生托福口语录音:如上音频。

口语题目:

Some people who unexpectedly receive a large amount of money spend it on practical things, while others spend it for pleasure only. Which do you think is better and why.

名师点评:
Comment for Independent Task 1 or 2
Overall Score:23

评分标准:
1、Generalization:论述You think it's better to spend money on practical things 的理由充分,且较具有层次感。
2、Delivery:语速均匀,整体语音语调的表述较为清晰。
3、Language Use:语言句型和词汇运用较为地道,表达方式较为清晰,部分表述不够地道哦。例如:put your money on ...最好表述为:spend your money on ...
4、Topic Development:信息观点表述流畅。

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