专八改错集训营

Long ago there was a prince who unwisely confided the media __1__ that while tending his loved garden, he often talked to his plants. __2__ He also warned his future subjects about losing touch with their natural surrounding and their rich cultural heritage. But the people __3__ scoffed and said it was the fuddy-duddy Prince and was out of __4__ touch. And they shook heads at the madness of the Prince’s forebear,King George III, who famously talked with a tree he had mistaken the King of Prussia. __5__ These days Britain’s Prince of Wales is still considered a tad eccentric. But increasingly, Charles Philip Windsor is winning applause for his campaign to combat that he calls the wanton destruction __6__ that has taken place with the name of progress. For 30 years __7__ the Prince has been in the forefront to promote kinder, gentler farming methods; protect Britain’s countryside urban sprawl; improve __8__ city landscapes; and safeguard the nation’s architectural heritage. And whereas his once a lonely if plumy voice crying in __9__ the wilderness, the Prince has seen many of his once maverick opinions became mainstream. __10__

参考答案及解析

参考答案及解析:
1.confided 后面加to。向某人透露……，应该用confide to sb
2.loved改为 beloved。loved只能用于被动语态，表示动作。不论是做表语还是定语，都只能用beloved。
3.surrounding改为surroundings。“surrounding” 是形容词，意思是“周围的”，当它做名词是，意思是“环境”，只能用surroundings。
4.将and改为who/that。这是一个强调句型，意思是“那个守旧的王子落伍了”。
5.在mistaken后面加上for。“把……误以为……”应该用mistake…for…。这句话的意思是：他把那棵树当作普鲁士的国王了。
6.that改为what。在这里what做代词，引导宾语从句，做combat的宾语。
7.将with改为in。In the name of 以为“以……名义”，为固定搭配。这里意思是：以进步为名义恣意的破坏。
8.在urban前加from。Protect …from…为固定搭配，指的是“保护……不受……的侵害”
9.once 前加 was。这里“his” 代表“his voice”，很明显这里缺少谓语动词。这里指“虽然他的声音曾经在荒野里哭喊，但是却无人聆听”。
10.将became改为become。See…do sth 为固定搭配