2014年英语专八考试汉译英部分答案及点评(HJ网校版)
日期:2014-04-04 11:49

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2014年英语专八考试汉译英部分真题(网友回忆版)

当我在小学毕了业的时候,亲友一致的愿意我去学手艺,好帮助母亲。我晓得我应当去找饭吃,以减轻母亲的勤劳困苦。可是,我也愿意升学。我偷偷的考入了师范学校——制服,饭食,书籍,宿处,都由学校供给。只有这样,我才敢对母亲说升学的话。入学,要交十圆的保证金。这是一笔巨款!母亲作了半个月的难,把这巨款筹到,而后含泪把我送出门去。她不辞劳苦,只要儿子有出息。当我由师范毕业,而被派为小学校校长,母亲与我都一夜不曾合眼。我只说了句:“以后,您可以歇一歇了!”她的回答只有一串串的眼泪。

中译英部分参考译文

注:为帮助大家理解,沪江网校版提供了全文翻译,大家可以对照学习,回忆自己考场上完成的划线部分翻译。

After I graduated from primary school, relatives and friends all suggested that I should drop out and learn a trade to help my mother. Although I knew that I ought to seek a livelihood to relieve mother of hard work and distress, I still aspired to go on with study. So I kept learning secretly. I had no courage to tell mother about the idea until admitted to a normal school which provided free uniforms, books, room and board. To enter the school, I had to pay ten Yuan as a deposit. This was a large sum of money for my family. However, after two weeks’ tough effort, mother managed to raise the money and sent me off to school in tears afterwards. She would spare no pains for her son to win a bright future. On the day when I was appointed the schoolmaster after graduation, mother and I spent a sleepless night. I said to her, "you can have a rest in the future." but she replied nothing, only with tears streaming down her face.

点评:本题是一篇典型的文学翻译,原文选自老舍名篇《我的母亲》。老舍的作品生活气息浓郁,语言朴实直白。因此,在翻译本篇时不仅要注意忠实于文字意义,更要忠实地再现原文的语言风格,所以要避免用过于高级的词汇表达和句子结构,用平实的语句表达出原文的精神面貌。

另外,关于散文汉译英,推荐阅读张培基教授译注的《英译中国现代散文选》,书中各篇均为汉英对照,并附详细注释及对原作者的一些必要的简介。对翻译过程中可能遇到的问题,如语言难点、翻译方法、历史背景等,编译者也作了一些分析讲解,对于文学翻译的学习大有裨益。
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重点单词
  • primaryadj. 主要的,初期的,根本的,初等教育的 n. 最主
  • relievev. 减轻,救济,解除
  • spareadj. 多余的,闲置的,备用的,简陋的 v. 抽出,饶
  • distressn. 痛苦,苦恼,不幸 vt. 使痛苦,使苦恼 a