专业八级改错练习第14期
日期:2009-06-09 16:07

(单词翻译:单击)

练习

【练习】

The hunter-gatherer tribes that today live as our prehistoric human __1

ancestors consume primarily a vegetable diet supplementing with animal foods __2

An analysis of 58 societies of modern hunter-gatherers, including the Kung of southern Africa, revealed that one-half emphasize gathering plants foods,

one-third concentrate on fishing, and only one-sixth are primarily hunters,Overall, two-thirds and more of the hunter-gatherer’s calories come from __3

plants. Detailed studies of the Kung by the food scientists at the University of London, showed that gathering is a more productive source of food than is hunting. An hour of hunting yields in average about 100 edible __4

calories, as an hour of gathering produces 240. __5

Plant foods provide for 60 percent to 80 percent of the Kung diet, and no __6

one goes hungry when the hunt fails. Interestingly, if they escape fatal infections or accidents, these contemporary aborigines live to old ages despite of the absence __7

of medical care. They experience no obesity, no middle-aged spread, little dental decay, no high blood pressure, no heart disease, and their blood cholesterol levels are very low (about half of the average American adult). __8

If no one is suggesting that we return to an aboriginal life style, we certainly __9

could use their eating habits as a model for healthier diet. __10

答案及讲解

【答案及讲解】

1 将 as 改为 like

此处的意思是“像史前人类祖先那样生活”。

2 将 supplementing 改为 supplemented

supplemented 修饰diet,可以看作which is supplemented with animal foods的简化形式。

3 将 and 改为or

4 将 in 改为 on

on average 是固定用法。

5 将 as 改为 while 或者 whereas

6 删掉for,或者将 provide 改为 account

此处provide 是及物动词,后面不用介词for

7 删掉第一个of

despite 做介词,后面直接接名词。

8 在 half 后加 that

that 指代前面的blood cholesterol levels,不能省略,因为这里是将部落成员的胆固醇含量与美国人的胆固醇含量相比较。

9 将 if 改为 whereas 或者 while

此处意思为“尽管没有人……,但是……”,是转折关系。

10 在 for 后面加不定冠词 a

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重点单词
  • prehistoricadj. 史前的 =prehistorical
  • overalladj. 全部的,全体的,一切在内的 adv. 总的来说
  • fataladj. 致命的,毁灭性的,决定性的
  • sourcen. 发源地,来源,原始资料
  • decayv. (使)衰退,(使)腐败,腐烂 n. 衰退,腐败,腐
  • escapev. 逃跑,逃脱,避开 n. 逃跑,逃脱,(逃避)方法、
  • productiveadj. 能生产的,有生产价值的,多产的
  • consumev. 消耗,花费,挥霍
  • analysisn. 分析,解析
  • ediblen. 食品,食物 adj. 可食用的