托福写作常见问题汇总
日期:2014-07-29 08:28

(单词翻译:单击)

不知所云 例:Many companies began using computers mouth.
  段落过长,不分段,主语与动词一致问题 She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time. 主语和动词在数方面不一致。
  句子别扭 We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed. 措辞过长或不清。换言之,句子显得滑稽可笑。
  关联词语重复 Since I want to go to a good school,therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. 不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。
  句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example,my friend in high school. 句子没有主要主语或主要动词,因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误,修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。
  不要使用get  When I got home,I got tired,so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式,意思也过于含糊,不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词,如become,receive, find,achieve,等等。
  介词多余 I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class,my classmate never mentioned about her husband. 在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown,home,there,here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词,因而不能在它们前面添加介词。
  跑题或不相关 There are many reasons to buy a car,preferably a nice car. 这个意思与文章的主题无关。
  陈词滥调 It is okay for children to fail sometimes. 所表达的意思很普通 大多数人都已经知道到了,因而就没有必要再说出来。
  重复冗余 Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints. 一种意思的表述不止一次,或者某个词语不必要。
  单数/复数 Many year ago,dinosaur roamed the Earths. 单词需要从单数变为复数,或者由复数变成单数。 单数可数名词 单数可数名词不能单独使用,应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词(a, the,my,his,her,Gary"s,no,any,1,3,50,most,等等)。
  拼写错误,主语、动词或宾语有问题 I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. 句子的基本结构有问题,缺少主语、动词或宾语,或者这些成分重复。
  语气与文章不符 I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris,London,Tokyo,and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. 语气与文章其他部分不相符,可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
  动词时态错误 Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food. 动词时态不正确 检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时还是完成时等等。
  选词不恰当 I was late getting home because I lost my way. 在这种情况下不应该使用该词 可选择更好的词语或者所使用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。
  单词形式不当 I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth. 所使用的单词的形式不正确 检查一下应该使用该词的名词、形容词或副词形式的哪一种。
  用词错误 Even I don‘t speak Spanish,I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation. 用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。
  以上就是托福写作中经常出现的问题,一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体,任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。以上语句中的出现的常见错误,希望考生能够避免。为了文章的华丽偏用一些另类语句会出彩,但是若写作中有问题,可是得不偿失。

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重点单词
  • checkn. 检查,支票,账单,制止,阻止物,检验标准,方格图案
  • achievev. 完成,达到,实现
  • containern. 容器,集装箱