经典托福写作病句修改(26-50)
日期:2014-02-27 17:35

(单词翻译:单击)

托福写作中出现的问题,最要命的就是书写句子的时候出现各种各样的问题。如何才能写出地道的句子呢,除了模仿托福范文以外,还有就是托福写作病句修改的练习。下面就将经典的托福写作病句进行修改范例,帮助大家掌握正宗的英语句型表达。
  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing。
  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal。
  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind。
  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax。
  28. What's about nonsmokers?
  改进: What about nonsmokers?
  29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life。
  改进: Everyone has friends in his life。
  31. I am not good at maths, but English
  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English。
  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
  33.It is children who clear about their interests。
  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests。
  34. I agree the latter idea。
  改进: I agree with the latter idea。
  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo。
  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo。
  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now。
  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe。
  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are。
  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn。
  38. No one knows all the things。
  改进: No one knows everything。
  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life。
  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life。
  40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages。
  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages。
  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up。
  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply。
  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor。
  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor。
  43. They will learn the bad habits。
  改进: They will develop bad habits。
  44. In this continued process, people make progress。
  改进: In this cycle, people make progress。
  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary。
  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary。
  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency。
  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings。
  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact。
  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result。
  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing。
  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream。
  49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost。
  改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss。
  50. I felt alone。
  改进: I felt lonely。
  以上就是托福写作病句修改技巧的分享,希望同学们通过上述例句的复习和掌握,能写出正宗的英语式句型。也希望同学们在托福写作考试的时候,更好的应用一些典型的英文句子。

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重点单词
  • disciplinen. 训练,纪律,惩罚,学科 vt. 训练,惩罚
  • willingadj. 愿意的,心甘情愿的
  • deficiencyn. 缺乏,不足,缺点
  • dissatisfiedadj. 不满意的;不高兴的;流露不满的 v. 使不满(
  • advantagen. 优势,有利条件 vt. 有利于
  • unnecessaryadj. 不必要的,多余的
  • peacefuladj. 安宁的,和平的
  • decisionn. 决定,决策
  • statusn. 地位,身份,情形,状况
  • fulfillmentn. 满足,完成,履行