2013年8月24日托福独立写作解析
日期:2013-09-02 16:33

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8.24: Agree or disagree: it is important to have rules about the types ofclothing that people are allowed to wear at work or school.

解析:

1、开头:话题引入+双方/对方观点+我方观点(thesis)及过渡句 80字--5分钟

2、TS1:营造良好的工作及学习氛围。 100字--8分钟

3、TS2:便于公司或学校体现专业形象。100字--8分钟

4、让步段:承认一下规范穿着也有一些坏处,限制自由,不利于个性;+打压(1.指出这与…相比其实是一个次要问题;或2.提出解决方案;或3.换一种角度思考柳暗花明)+回归主旨(我还是认为,规范穿衣有好处的)80字--5分钟

5、结尾:重申观点+归纳上述理由。60字--3分钟

开头:With remarkable progress of the society, the standard of people's dressing style hasundergone profound changes. Concerning the debate that whether it is important to haverules about the types of clothing that people are allowed to wear at work orschool, people differ in their attitudes. It is widely acknowledged that it isgood for people to show their individuality by wearing types of clothing at their will. However, I firmly holdthe view that dressing code in school or at work is a necessity. Andmy reasons and examples are given below.

让步段:Admittedly, wearing certain types of clothing can have one ortwo downsides. For instance, dressing code makes people lack of individuality. However,compared with good grades in school and satisfactory working performance, the expression of one’s individuality by wearing different clothes is in fact a minor issue, because good grades and working performance have nothing to do with one's clothing. And therefore, I am still convinced that having rules about types of clothing is essential for students or staff members.

结尾段: From what has been discussed above, we cansafely draw a conclusion that it is very important to standardize people’sdressing at work or school. Not only because uniformed clothing can create aprofessional atmosphere, but also it makes it convenient for school authortiy and companies to manage its students and staff.

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重点单词
  • performancen. 表演,表现; 履行,实行 n. 性能,本事
  • conclusionn. 结论
  • essentialn. 要素,要点 adj. 必要的,重要的,本质的
  • remarkableadj. 显著的,异常的,非凡的,值得注意的
  • certainadj. 确定的,必然的,特定的 pron. 某几个,某
  • convenientadj. 方便的,便利的
  • standardizev. 标准化,使合于标准
  • disagreev. 不一致,有分歧,不适应,不适宜
  • individualityn. 个性,人格,特征
  • minoradj. 较小的,较少的,次要的 n. 未成年人,辅修科