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富兰克林•德兰诺•罗斯福FDR Franklin Delano Roosevelt
Sara H. Franklin Delano Roosevelt was yet another historical figure that used his optimistic spirit to motivate the nation when, unexpectedly, things shifted in the wrong direction. The abrupt crash of the Stock Market in 1929, which ignited the turbulent and trying Great Depression, sent the United States into a financial downfall. If not for FDR's implementation of the New Deal, an ambitious plan striving for economic recovery, the Great Depression would have augmented the already severe impact it had on American citizens. By staying hopeful, perseverant, and positive during the tumultuous years of the Great Depression, FDR was able to succeed in his political endeavors and sustain a national unity despite the difficulties of that time period.
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用词准确，句式多样，结构平行。这些从最后一个句子就能看得出来："By staying hopeful, perseverant, and positive during the tumultuous years of the Great Depression, FDR was able to succeed in his political endeavors and sustain a national unity despite the difficulties of that time period."写得真的很棒！