托福独立写作辅导:美国总统奥巴马制造的作文模板
日期:2012-12-14 16:54

(单词翻译:单击)

如果谈起来作文,很多名师就会跟你谈一谈“词、句、段、篇、章”,这个时候,你的瞌睡虫也就马上袭来了。太多的理论实在是枯燥不堪,打破传统,直接引取万人瞩目的奥巴马演讲,原汁原味的为各位考友还原英语的真实面貌。把枯燥的理论Pia飞到天边,各位考友可以直接模仿美国总统奥巴马的最新演讲,让自己的作文分数一飞冲天!


  文章编辑方式为第一段是原文,第二段是制造完成的模板。为了保证考友们不会把新托福模板理解错误,以及保证句意的理解,把原文也放在了这里,而且力劝每一位考友首先研究原文的含义,然后再使用模板,绝对是事半功倍的选择!


  Think about the America within our reach: a country that leads the world in educating its people; an America that attracts a new generation of high-tech manufacturing and high-paying jobs; a future where we’re in control of our own energy; and our security and prosperity aren’t so tied to unstable parts of the world.


  Think about the XXXXX within our reach: XXXXX that leads the world in XXXXX; XXXXX that attracts a new generation of XXXXX; a future where we’re in control of our own XXXXX; and XXXXX.


  超棒的用在开头段,表明多方的观点。


  They understood they were part of something larger, that they were contributing to a story of success that every American had a chance to share: the basic American promise that if you worked hard, you could do well enough to raise a family, own a home, send your kids to college, and put a little away for retirement.


  They understood they were part of something larger, that they were contributing to a story of success that XXXXX: the basic XXXXX promise that if XXXXX, you could do well enough to XXXXX, XXXXX, XXXXX, and XXXXX.


  表明XXXXX的作用,以及好处。


  We can either settle for a country where a shrinking number of people do really well, while a growing number of Americans barely get by, or we can restore an economy where everyone gets a fair shot, and everyone does their fair share, and everyone plays by the same set of rules.


  We can either settle for a country where XXXXX, while a growing number of XXXXX, or we can restore an society where everyone gets a fair shot, and everyone does their fair share, and everyone plays by the same set of rules.


  【超好的用于公平的主题】用于论证段,谈及这么做的好处。


  And it plunged our economy into a crisis that put millions out of work, saddled us with more debt, and left innocent, hard-working Americans holding the bag.


  And it plunged our XXXXX into a crisis that put millions XXXXX, saddled us with more XXXXX, and left innocent, hard-working XXXXX in the depth of despair.


  用于论证段,将主题进行扩展,论证做XXXXXX的坏处


  Building a world-class transportation system is part of what made us an economic superpower.


  Building a world-class XXXXX is part of what made us an XXXXX superpower.


  写得十分到位的,用句论证段或者首尾段,讲做XXXXX的好处


  And I want to cut through the maze of confusing training programs so that from now on people like Jackie have one program, one website, and one place to go for all the information and help that they need.


  And XXXXX want to build up the plan of XXXXX so that from now on people like XXXXX have one program, one website, and one place to go for all the information and help that they need.


  太赞了,简单易用,用于论证段,将主题进行扩展,讲做XXX的好处。


  For less than 1 percent of what our nation spends on education each year, we’ve convinced nearly every state in the country to raise their standards for teaching and learning, the first time that’s happened in a generation.


  For less than 1 percent of what our nation spends on education each year, we’ve convinced nearly every XXXXX in the country to raise their standards for teaching and learning, the first time that’s happened in a generation.


  【用于教育主题】令人感动啊!超喜欢的!只需修改一处!讲发展教育的好处


  We also know that when students don’t walk away from their education, more of them walk the stage to get their diploma.


  XXXXX also know that when XXXXX don’t walk away from their XXXXX, more of them walk the stage to get their XXXXX.


  用于任意一段,将做XXXXX事情带来的好处。


  After all, innovation is what America has always been about.


  After all, XXXXX is what human has always been about.


  用于3-4段,提出自己的分论点。


  And, by the way, it was public research dollars — over the course of 30 years — that helped develop the technologies to extract all this natural gas out of shale rock, reminding us that government support is critical in helping businesses get new energy ideas off the ground.


  And, by the way, it was XXXXX — over the course of 30 years — that helped develop the technologies to XXXXX, reminding us that XXXXX is critical in helping XXXXX.


  很有历史感的一句话,用于任意一段,讲做XXXXX的事情的长期的好处


  But I will not walk away from the promise of clean energy.


  But I will not walk away from XXXXX.


  用于任意一段,表示坚决支持XXXXX


  It’s time to end the taxpayer giveaways to an industry that rarely has been more profitable and double down on a clean energy industry that never has been more promising.


  It’s time to end the XXXXX to XXXXX that rarely has been more profitable and double down on XXXXX that never has been more promising.


  太赞了!亲一口先!用于最后一段,表明反对XXXXX。


  在这里,小编请各位考友注意,这些内容是特别为23分以上,有很好的鉴赏能力,准备冲击作文满分的考友准备的素材,当你在20分以下的时候,请在专人指导下使用,否则很容易强撸灰飞烟灭!


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重点单词
  • innocentadj. 清白的,无辜的,无害的,天真纯洁的,无知的
  • convincedadj. 信服的
  • extractn. 榨出物,精华,摘录 vt. 拔出,榨出,摘录,提取
  • criticaladj. 批评的,决定性的,危险的,挑剔的 adj. 临
  • controln. 克制,控制,管制,操作装置 vt. 控制,掌管,支
  • settlev. 安顿,解决,定居 n. 有背的长凳
  • restorevt. 恢复,修复,使复原
  • transportationn. 运输,运输系统,运输工具
  • prosperityn. 繁荣,兴旺
  • securityn. 安全,防护措施,保证,抵押,债券,证券