托福分类话题写作每日一练 第106期
日期:2012-11-02 14:01

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106. You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice.

参考分析:

[36]提供了option,但是不能选飞机(为了64公里的路而乘坐飞机有点ridiculous)。

比较“步行(on foot; walk)”“汽车(automobile; car)”“自行车(bicycle)”。

选择bicycle可能更容易写一些。

106、选择私人汽车比较好
(1)节省时间
(2)节约开支,油费比火车票便宜
(3)可以享受路上的风景

106 Means of transportation

Advances in science have thrown before us a number of options for covering distances, either long or short.

The type of transport to be used for covering distances depends upon a range of factors like distance between the and starting point and the destination, time and money constraint for traveling, availability of different mode of transports, time taken for travel, safety considerations and the number of persons traveling.

To cover a distance of 40 miles, for instance, the options I can think of are on foot, by bicycle, by motorcycle, by car, or by bus. The longest time taken for traveling this far will be on foot while the shortest time will be by car or motorcycle, but again since the number of persons traveling is one which is me, a car will not be a feasible option as it will be underutilized and will prove to be costly because of high fuel consumption and initial cost.

A bicycle will be cheaper in terms of initial cost and there is no fuel consumption. But it will take much longer time to travel, and it may cause physical fatigue. Therefore, this option is ruled out. A bus will prove to be a cheaper mode but the flexibility is limited regarding timing of arrival and departure. A motorcycle will be economical but will not be safe to drive on highways.

Therefore considering all modes of transportation available and taking into account various factors mentioned above, I will prefer to take a bus as it will be safe and economical.

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重点单词
  • specificadj. 特殊的,明确的,具有特效的 n. 特效药,特性
  • applicationn. 应用; 申请; 专心 n. 应用软件程序
  • underutilizedvt. 未充分使用(underutilize过去式)
  • availableadj. 可用的,可得到的,有用的,有效的
  • rangen. 范围,行列,射程,山脉,一系列 v. 排列,归类于
  • fatiguen. 疲乏,疲劳,累活 adj. 疲劳的 vt. 使 .
  • availabilityn. 有效,有用,有益;可得到的人(或物)
  • coveringn. 覆盖物,遮避物 adj. 掩护的,掩盖的
  • flexibilityn. 灵活性,柔韧性,适应性
  • feasibleadj. 可行的,可能的