托福分类话题写作每日一练 第63期
日期:2012-08-28 13:24

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63. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.

参考分析:

表明立场,基本同意这个观点。因为这个观点没有使用绝对词。(Basically/Fundamentally, it is true that…)

  • 举一些例子支持题目中的观点。

  • 然而也确实有些痛苦经历对将来毫无帮助。比如对大多数不喜欢化学的人来讲,中学时期在元素周期表(periodic table [system] of elements)中苦苦挣扎的经验对以后的人生并没有什么帮助。

  • 有些父母、教师用这个说法作为虐待孩子的借口,说是为了孩子的将来着想,就很没有道理了。

63、同意在最困难的时候的经历是未来最宝贵的教训
(1)在学习中,最困难的时候,给我们带来了很多宝贵的教训。考试成绩差,但是决不放弃。
(2)在工作中,最困难的时候,给我们带来的很多宝贵的教训。刚到一个单位和同事相处,犯了很多错误。这个过程给你带来人际交流的能力
(3)在生活中,最苦难的时候,给我们带来了很多宝贵的教训。比如说到一个地方丢了钱,没有人帮助,自己打工挣钱,培养了独立意识

Topic 63 Are difficult experiences valuable lessons?

Some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time, can later become valuable experiences. I cannot agree with them more. There are numerous reasons why I hold confidence on this opinion, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

Difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In the course of our life, we will face numerous difficulties, and each difficulty will help us grow up, and become a valuable lesson for the future. A toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows how to walk, and a child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. In addition, only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. We will never appreciate anything that comes so easy. Difficulties can make us feel stronger and be more confident for the future obstacles.

Furthermore, difficulties in our work can help us gain more experience and knowledge. Most of the times we can gain knowledge and experiences faster through experiencing difficulties in our life and trying to find a solutions to the perplexities that we face. There is a famous saying, "no pain, no gain." For example, when we take on a new job that we do not have much experience in, the first few weeks can be extremely painful and we may feel enormous pressure and difficulties. And we will try our best to adjust, to learn and to think, how to do this job better. The more difficulties we feel, the harder we try to acquire the skills and knowledge to overcome it. Learning and this stage is extremely efficient and our problemsolving skills well increase. After we overcome more and more problems, we can become an experienced worker in this field and will be able to take on more challenges. We will never fear that we will face the same kind of problem again. This means that we have accumulated valuable experiences for the future.

In a word, a difficult experience is a gift that life gives us. We should appreciate it and take it as a precious opportunity to gain knowledge and experience about our study, work and life.

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重点单词
  • primaryadj. 主要的,初期的,根本的,初等教育的 n. 最主
  • beneficialadj. 有益的,有利的
  • explorev. 探险,探测,探究
  • overcomevt. 战胜,克服,(感情等)压倒,使受不了 vi. 获
  • pressuren. 压力,压强,压迫 v. 施压
  • efficientadj. 效率高的,胜任的
  • experiencedadj. 有经验的
  • confidenceadj. 骗得信任的 n. 信任,信心,把握
  • preciousadj. 宝贵的,珍贵的,矫揉造作的 adv. 极其地
  • specificadj. 特殊的,明确的,具有特效的 n. 特效药,特性