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每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。
在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！
33. You have received a gift of money. The moneyis enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert youwant to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details tosupport your answer.
参考分析： 选择哪一个都无所谓，只要列出三个理由。 比较偷懒的方法是，“根据不同的时间，有不同的选择”。参见：范文。 相关题目：[142]、[161] |
33、有钱可以去买音乐会的票 |
Topic 33Jewelry orconcert?
People make money for living first and then use the moneyfor other things that lead them to a happy and healthy life, such as buyingsomething they like, watching a movie, or eating a big meal. In my opinion, ifI have received a gift of money, I would like to buy a ticket to a concert.
For me, music is always attractive. When I have completeda whole day's study or finished the discussion on some academic problems, myspirit will be eager to relax for a while. When people want to relax, it is awonderful thing to go to a concert: the music playing on the concert is thebest thing to set your mind free. If you spend the money to listen to aconcert, you will fell that the cost is valuable.
In addition, you can attend the concert with yourfriends. It is a good chance to build up the relationship between your friendsand you. People are always busy with their work and study, losing manyoccasions of communicating with each other, a splendid concert and link ustogether. The music, the conductor and all the musicians on the concert canoffer us a common topic; we can discuss those things together.
Furthermore, listening to a concert let me learn moreabout music and all kinds of instruments, it also culture the appreciatoryability. To think that I spend the money to buy a piece of jewelry, I canacquire nothing but being a little bit beautiful at one of my friend's birthdayparties. In that case, I just fell that the money has gone.
Money, even a little money, can make your life more valuable,for this reason, I prefer to buy a ticket to a concert than to a piece of jewelry.
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