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每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。

在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！

13. Some people prefer to eat at food stands orrestaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do youprefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Topic 13 Eat out or eat at home?

Nowadays, some people like to eat at home and prepare food by themselves,but others prefer to eat outside in restaurants or at food stands. As far as Iam concerned, I prefer to eat at home.(标准式开头，先阐述现今社会状况，再表达个人观点，开门见山)

Of course there are some advantages to eat out. Firstly, restaurantsoffer a more comfortable environment to eat and the food there tastes moredelicious than home-cooked meals. In addition, eating at restaurants is a goodway of getting together with friends. People also do not need to worry aboutwashing dishes and cleaning. For people who are too busy to cook, eating out iscertainly an ideal（理想的）choice. Furthermore, for people do not know how to cook and do not havesomeone to cook for them, eat out seems to be the only choice.（本段是让步段，先讲在外吃的好处一个是舒适的环境美味的食物，另一个是给不会做饭和不知做饭给谁的人提供吃饭的条件）

However, I prefer to cook and eat and home. The main reason is that athome, family members can prepare their meals and enjoying their food together,which can enhance their relationships. Family members can talk, make jokes andexchange feelings on current affairs with each other while preparing a meal.Parents have a chance to communicate with their kids and keep track of whatthey are thinking and doing; while children can learn to help with somehousehold tasks and develop intimacy（与父母增进感情）with their parents. Image that you and your brothers and sisters helpyour mother to cook on a weekend, and enjoy the food later on（稍后）, and you feel everything is so nice.（这是第一段论述在家吃好处是可以与家人增进感情种种，以自己为例子显得生动可信）

Another reason is that eating at home can save money. The same amountof money that you spend on a meal in a restaurant can buy a lot more foods froma supermarket. You can use the money saved to buy a new cloth, or attend aconcert.（本段是从经济方面来论述在家吃确实可行）

General speaking, eating out side is comfortable and convenient buteating at home has more benefits. I prefer to eat at home.（这篇文章是标准的议论文结构，没有特别华丽的语言，但是结构清晰论述完整，没有语法错误，这也是保分的必要条件）

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