2015年5月30日雅思写作解析及语料库
　　Some people believe that international tourism have harmful effects. Why do they think so? How to change their views? 有人认为，国际游的影响是有害的，他们为何持有这种观点，如何改变他们的的观点?
　　雅思点评：
　　题目指令为分析原因和解决问题。本文为旧题改写，需要完成的任务是分析国家发展旅游业带来的弊端以及提出解决策略，帮助人们改变对于旅游业的消极态度。
　　雅思全文布局图：
　　首段：背景介绍 + 作家立场
　　二段：原因的展开：谈及为何一些人对于旅游业持有消极的的态度
　　三段：策略的展开：谈及国际旅游业的利好去说服一些人对于旅游业的消极态度
　　尾段：作家立场：支持旅游业，总结旅游业对于游客和相关国家的利好。
　　雅思原创范文赏析：
　　首段：背景介绍 + 写作目的
　　International tourism has been encouraged in many nations around the globe because it produces positive effects on economic growth and local government. However，some problem inevitably ensue，which accounts for why some people hold negative attitudes toward international tourism. This essay aims to explore the reasons why some people are not supportive of tourism and then present some recommendations.
　　雅思解析：
　　1. It produces positive effects on economic growth and local government 国际旅游对经济发展和地方政府有积极作用
　　2. However，some problem inevitably ensue，which accounts for why some people hold negative attitude towards international tourism.然而，一些问题不可避免地随着发生，这就解释了为何一些人对于国际旅游业持有消极的态度。
　　3. This essay aims to explore the reasons why some people are not supportive of …… and then present some recommendations. 本文的写作目的是探究下为何一些人不支持……，再提出相关的建议。
　　二段： 原因的展开：(游客为何对于旅游业持有消极的态度)
　　The reasons why some people hold indifferent attitudes toward international tourism are manifold. Here, some of them will be explored. First, a large flowing population many cause serious destruction of the natural environment in those areas owing rich tourism resources. Further, some visitors unconscious behaviors might be considered as disrespectable and unfriendly due to the cultural differences. For instance，questions about religious beliefs， marriage，personal income are considered as taboo for some westerners. Eventually, even though sightseers might make the locals’ purse heavy, they, at the same time, interfere with the peaceful current life in some areas
　　雅思解析：
　　1. A large flowing population many cause serious destruction of the natural environment in those areas owing rich tourism resources.大批游客的涌入会对那些拥有旅游资源地区的自然环境造成严重的破坏
　　2. Some visitors unconscious behaviors might be considered as disrespectable and unfriendly due to the cultural differences. 由于文化的差异，一些游客的行为也许会认作是不值得尊敬的，不够友善的。
　　3. For instance，questions about religious beliefs， marriage，personal income are considered as taboo for some westerners. 例如，有些西方人很忌讳别人打听他们的宗教信仰，婚姻状况，个人收入。
　　4. Even though sightseers might make the locals’ purse heavy, they, at the same time, interfere with the peaceful current life in some areas. 尽管游客会增加地方人的收入，同时，他们也许会打扰一些地区一向平静的生活。

　　三段：策略的展开：(如果改变人们对于旅游业的消极态度)
　　In spite of some demerits triggered by promoting international tourism，the glaring merits can be cited to alter some people’s cold attitudes. First, tourism is one of the most stimulating factors to spur the economy. For example, China needs a great amount of foreign currencies for its modernization drive. Tourism is one of the most significant ways to obtain such currencies. Also, it a business that could provide numerous job opportunities. In the tourist attractions, it is common to that even those uneducated people can make a living simply by selling souvenirs, local specialties and so on, which relieves the employment pressure of local government. To illustrate， tourism facilities the development of the catering business and local public transit. Last, tourism is positive to cultural diversity and could promote the mutual understanding and friendships among people from diverse countries, thus, it will create the future cooperation in the international affairs.
　　雅思解析：
　　1. In spite of some demerits triggered by promoting international tourism，the glaring merits can be cited to alter some people’s cold attitudes 尽管国际旅游业带来一些弊端，其明显的利好可被引用帮助人们改变对于国际旅游业的消极态度。
　　2. Tourism facilities the development of the catering business and local public transit. 旅游业有助于餐饮业和地方交通的发展。
　　3. tourism is positive to cultural diversity and could promote the mutual understanding and friendships among people from different countries, thus, it will create the future cooperation in the international affairs. 旅游业有助于文化的多元性，增进不同国家之间人们的友谊和理解，因此，会在国际事务中促成更多的合作。
　　尾段：作家立场：
　　In a nutshell，my stand is that whether the effect of international travel is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will continue to be indispensable part for both visitors and relevant nations, therefore, international tourism should be advocated. To ordinary people, traveling is definitely one of the most effective ways to relieve pressure and expand mind. As for many nations, promoting tourism is a powerful force to spur domestic demand and booms the economy.
　　雅思解析：
　　1. Whether the effect of international travel is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will continue to be indispensable part for both visitors and relevant nations. 不管旅游的影响是好是坏，有一件事是可以肯定的，旅游将会继续是我们生活中重要的一部分, 不仅仅是对于游客，更是对于拥有旅游资源的国家。
　　2. To ordinary people, traveling is definitely one of the most effective ways to relieve pressure and expand mind. 对于普通人来说，旅游当然是缓解压力和开拓视野的最有效的方式之一。
　　3. As for many nations, promoting tourism is a powerful force to spur domestic demand and booms the economy. 对于国家而言，旅游是促进内需，刺激经济增长的重要力量。
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