写作题目与分析

写作题目：

2013年7月18日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文

People can go to shop, bank,and work with computer ,but the danger of the computer is people are getting isolated and losing some social skills .
To what extend do you agree with this point?

写作分析：

写作方法：
一波三折 ：
首段 ： 背景描述 + 论点 转述（正向 / 反向 ） + 自己的观点
第二段 ：支持/反对的观点 论点 +理由
第三段 ：支持/反对的观点 论点+ 例证
第四段： 让步段 “让步+转折句”即观点的合理性，+对此观点的反驳
第五段： 总结全文 +强调观点 +得出结论（提倡的解决措施）
思路分析：
第一段：
题目中的社会背景：
1 go to shop , bank , and work with computer
观点：
Danger of the computer
两个方面：
1 getting isolated
2 losing the social skills
第二段：
论点 +理由句
Alienation + the reason
第三段
论点+ 例证
The loss of social skills + example
第四段
合理理由+对此观点反驳
合理观点：
1) the convenient and fast
2) Communication with others without going
反驳理由：
1） the emotional alienation
2） the loss of dealing with specific trouble
第五段：
总结全文 +强调观点 +得出结论（提倡的解决措施）
总结全文 +强调观点
The alienation and loss of ability triggered by internet
得出结论
Facing up with the pessimistic consequence caused by Internet
Taking the effective and efficient way to cope with

写作参考范文

写作参考范文：

第一段：
Science and technology developing rapidly, especially for the Internet popularizing, gives rise to various considerable changing and advantages, in terms of online shopping, relative money logger applying widely and enhancing the effectiveness of the work greatly, etc .However, the potentially detrimental impact from Internet can not be ignored, which is conspicuously embodies in the alienation between individuals and the deficiency of skills of effective communication .After the thoughtful and serious consideration, I prefer to harbor the above perspective that the Internet has its own demerits and localization more.

第二段：
To begin with, emotional alienation between individuals has been the irreversible tendency of the current society. Namely, an increasingly prevalent number of individuals in current society consider the Internet as the indispensible part of life to devote more time and energy into entertaining on it, unavoidably, to exacerbate the preference and awareness of everyone living in the self-centered world without too much considering the relation and emotion with others.

第三段：
Besides, the Internet disseminating and applying widely exerts the devastating impact on the social skills of individuals.For example, Individuals can tackle almost various issues and troubles in daily routine by using the Internet, inevitably, resulting in lacking of face-to-face verbal communication and coordination with others, even to lose the skills of coping with the practical issues in daily life in private with clear trait of thought and effective approach.

第四段：
There is no denying that the Internet not only brings about the convenient and fast, but provides the unprecedented platform to communicate with individuals without going outside, however, from another point of view, remaining within doors to communicate tend to exacerbate the emotional alienation between individuals further and emerge with the loss of skills of adapting to society and dealing with specific issue that confused them in daily life

第五段：
On balance, based on the above analyzing and thought,conspicuously , I firmly harbor the perspective that Internet has the compelling obligation to cause the alienation between individuals and certain loss of social skills due to its insuperable limitation .Only when we face up with pessimistic consequence triggered by Internet and take the effective and efficient way can we probably change the deteriorating social.