2013年7月13日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文
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写作题目与分析

写作题目:

2013年7月13日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文

The tendency to copy is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumers' goods.
To what extend do you agree or disagree.

写作分析:

关键词:
1)The tendency to copy
2)Popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer’s goods
思路:一波三折写法
理由一: the symbol of mixture of different culture , economic integration
理由二:a form of self-expression , the presentation of personality ,mood and aesthetic appreciation
让步段 (理由):
1)plenty of manufactures to make more profits
2)certain groups without analyzing to purchase and imitate blindly.
转折 :
1)limited temporary profits instead of the long-term and plentiful economic benefits .
2) consumers to be more sensible levels to make the determined attempt to purchase
结论:the irreversible tendency instead of imitating phenomenon

写作参考范文

写作参考范文:

首段:
In current society especially in recent years, purchasing and chasing fashionable clothes and other consumer's products emerging dramatically turns out to be common phenomenon of society. Some individuals deem it is the result of mutual imitating, however, as far as I am concerned that it is the inevitable tenor of globalization and economic integration and the Internet popularizing.

第二段 : 不认同 ,理由一
To begin with, purchasing the popularity of fashionable clothes and other consumer's products is the symbol of mixture of different culture, economic integration and advanced technology, to give rise to the lifestyle changing, which can be well explained by the following example. Take the eminent Mobile Phone Apple for example. It is widely accepted and applied by increasing prevalent number of people around the world especially for Chinese, due to its extraordinary function and humanized style of designing.

第三段:不认同理由二
In addition, chasing the popularity of fashion clothing and other consumption goods is also a form of self-expression, the presentation of personality and aesthetic appreciation. Namely, a sizeable percentage of individuals tend to have more sense of identity toward the main fashionable tendency, which can be attributed to the powerful and potential influence of media and advertisement as well as the certain group who are living around.

第四段:让步段
There is no denying that plenty of manufactures imitate other eminent band to make more profits, and the certain groups without analyzing and distinguishing purchase blindly. However, in terms of manufactures, imitating can merely obtain limited temporary profits instead of the long-term and plentiful economic benefits. In terms of consumers, they will return to be more sensible levels to make the determined attempt to purchase more suitable and fashionable clothes and reasonable consumption goods according their financial situation.

结论:
On balance, taking into account the above perspectives, I am convinced that the popularity of fashion is the irreversible tendency brought about by advanced communication , soaring technology and the progress of economic and cultural integration .

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重点单词
  • presentationn. 陈述,介绍,赠与 n. [美]讲课,报告
  • purchasevt. 买,购买 n. 购买,购买的物品 n. 支
  • currentn. (水、气、电)流,趋势 adj. 流通的,现在的,
  • obtainvt. 获得,得到 vi. 通用,流行,存在
  • emergingvi. 浮现,(由某种状态)脱出,(事实)显现出来
  • tenorn. 要旨,誉本,一般趋向,男高音,次中音乐器 adj.
  • suitableadj. 合适的,适宜的 adv. 合适地,恰当地
  • phenomenonn. 现象,迹象,(稀有)事件
  • extendv. 扩充,延伸,伸展,扩展
  • inevitableadj. 不可避免的,必然(发生)的