雅思写作范文分享:罪犯的惩罚措施
日期:2014-01-26 23:58

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  雅思写作经典范文向来就是广大中国考生备考雅思的一个重要材料,因为雅思写作经典范围之所以能够获得高分,往往在结构、句型/词汇搭配上都有很多可取之处,下面就是小编整理的雅思写作范文:罪犯的惩罚措施。

  Topic : Some people belive that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime . Others , however , argue that the circumstances of an individual crime , and the motivation for committing it , should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment .
  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .
  Answer : Band 7.5
  Fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debatable issue . There are many arguments supporting both views , those for and those against fixed punishments .
  On the one hand , fixed punishments will have a deterring effect on society . Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime , will reconsider committing this act in the first place .
  This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security , through minimising the number of crimes committed .
  If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the crime they are accused of , penal decisions would be largely arbitrary . This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts .
  On the other hand , taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity .
  A person killing in self-defense can not be compared to a serial killer , moving from one victim to the next . In my opinion an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity .
  There has to be fixed punishment for all crimes . However , criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions .
  An example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is competition law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine , according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime .
  As for the exemptions , in some countries the law exempts thiefs stealing food during a a period of famine taking into consideration the distress and hunger .
  Also , a person killing in self-defense will be exempted from punishment.

  以上就是这篇关于罪犯的惩罚措施的雅思写作范文的全文,比较符合我们国家目前的国情,同时可以看出这篇雅思写作经典范文采用的是分总文章结构,同时长短句的搭配是值得借鉴的,同时一些小词组和词汇都用的很灵活和有深度。

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重点单词
  • competitionn. 比赛,竞争,竞赛
  • violationn. 违反,违背,妨碍
  • debatableadj. 有疑问的,有争议的,成问题的
  • stabilityn. 稳定性,居于修道院
  • issuen. 发行物,期刊号,争论点 vi. & vt 发行,流
  • certainadj. 确定的,必然的,特定的 pron. 某几个,某
  • prerequisiten. 先决条件 adj. 作为前提的,必备的
  • approachn. 接近; 途径,方法 v. 靠近,接近,动手处理
  • convincevt. 使确信,使信服,说服
  • committedadj. 献身于某种事业的,委托的