2013年8月3日雅思写作真题回忆和范文
日期:2013-08-06 10:48

(单词翻译:单击)

作文真题

小作文流程图:Processed diagram,drinking water production,太阳能转换;


大作文:In many countries today,people in cities either live alone or in small family units,rather than in large,extended framily groups.Is this a positive or negative trend?

作文解析附范文

试题解析:

Live individual 意味着不结婚,不和父母住一起;small family units指的是丁克夫妇,不要孩子的夫妻。have children late in life是说生孩子晚。后两道题都是report题型,且都是问原因和结果;而今天的题目问优劣势,但是有交叉部分。

提纲:

Positive:

1.独立,自由

2. 专注追求事业和个人成就

negative:

1.老龄化,劳动力缺乏,医疗开支增加

2.幸福感降低,孤独感增加

3.传统文化丢失

In modern society, young people prefer to stay apart from their parents and live alone in a metropolis. Further, they have a tendency of postponing their parenthood until late 30’s or even early 40’s.

Young adults adopt this very independent lifestyle in the hope of taking some advantages. In this scenario, they have more freedom which allows them to do what they find interesting and worthwhile but their parenting may not because the older generation may hold their traditional way of life or values which may be rejected by the younger one. On top of the generation gap, nuclear family favors career pursuit which requires much dedication including time, energy and concentration, thus conflicting with extended family which requires the same. To achieve the dream of success, young people have left their hometown and their family, rushing alone into major cities where more social resources can be explored and more chances of career success can be expected. (定语从句,what引导宾语从句,but并列句,原因状语从句,被动句,非谓语,where引导状语从句)

However, this modern lifestyle can have some negative effects on individuals and the society as a whole. Firstly low birthrates can result in an ageing population and a lack of labor force in the future. Medical care service will be in high demand and medical cost will rise significantly. In terms of traditional culture, respect for family and community is being impaired at the cost of personal career pursuit. Living alone without long term and stable relationships is widely thought to be associated with the lack of personal sense of happiness and the increase of sense of isolation, which would reduce an individual’s general satisfaction with life. (并列句,被动句,定语从句)

My personal view on Dink and single family is not totally optimistic. While the young couples or singles enjoy their personal space and career oriented urban lifestyle without the responsibility of raising children, they are disconnected with their families and original community and hence losing traditional values and cultures, and being assimilated by globally popular culture. (while对比从句,被动句,非谓语)

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重点单词
  • communityn. 社区,社会,团体,共同体,公众,[生]群落
  • diagramn. 图解,图表 vt. 用图解法表示
  • popularadj. 流行的,大众的,通俗的,受欢迎的
  • dedicationn. 奉献,献词,献堂礼
  • originaladj. 最初的,原始的,有独创性的,原版的 n. 原件
  • tendencyn. 趋势,倾向
  • adoptv. 采用,收养,接受
  • urbanadj. 城市的,都市的
  • optimisticadj. 乐观的,乐观主义的
  • independentadj. 独立的,自主的,有主见的 n. 独立派人士,无