2013年2月23日雅思写作解析及范文
日期:2013-02-26 17:21
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回忆部分整理自考生回忆，若有疏漏之处望大家谅解，也欢迎各位考生积极补充。
A类小作文
| 图表类型： | 流程图 |
| 作文题目： | The diagram shows the process of collecting rain water and purifying it to drinking water in Australia. |
| 写作指导： | 1时间顺序 2 连接词的使用 3 被动语态 4 一般现在时 5 分阶段 |
A类大作文
| 作文题目： | Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What're the reasons for this problem? What're the effects on the society? 在很多国家，选修理科的学生不是很多。请就这个问题解释原因，并指出对于社会的影响。 |
| 题型类别: | 解释现象类 |
| 写作思路： | 有关科目设置的题基本上都是有关中小学的，如science 对比arts, 而关于大学的题目主要是讨论理论课和专业课的侧重问题，从这一点来说，这是一道新题。回答这道题首先要明确一点：不选择science的学生都转向哪里了？近年大学比较流行的专业有business, accounting, economics, nursing, computer science, communication, education. 第二点，science到底指什么？它指的是physics, chemistry, biology |
| 写作指导： | 第一段：science 不像以前那么流行，很多学生转向business, accounting, economics 第二段：原因有 1 难学 2 毕业后的工资不如商科高 3 实用性不高 第三段：负面影响 1 科学与物质生活的紧密联系 2 science是很多实用学科的基础 第四段：总结 |
| 范文指导： | In some rapidly developing countries, increasing university studentsmajorin business, accounting, communication or computer programing rather than science. I personally believe that this is aninevitable transitioninthe era of informationand globalization whencapitalflows worldwide and communication technology play a role in almost every field（状语从句）. The changes in technology and socialevolvementare beingreflectedin the university subjectpreference.（进行时被动语态） The first reason that scienceloses its popularityto otherdisciplinesrelates to theemployment rateand starting salaries upon graduation.（同位语从句） Science undergraduatesriskhigher unemployment and earn less than computer programmers or businessmen and thegapmay be wider in Master degree.（并列句）During theeconomic recession, some students with interest in science maygive into the pressure in reality. Another contributor is the difficulty of science subjects that prevent manypotentialstudents fromenrollingin thisfaculty.（定语从句） Picturing oneself as a scientist is not easy for a high school leaver. On top of the difficulty of this discipline itself, theapplicationin practice andtransforminginto profit is harder. However, science is so crucial to our human society that no country canafford the consequencesof ignoring it.（结果状语从句）Science is the basis of many practical disciplines such as environment science, medical science, space science, engineering,genetic scienceand so forth. Without the support of general science, many other fields would find it very challenging to get further developed. What’s worse, science is directly related to our material life. Welive onscientific research findings and products,ranging fromenergy supply, aircraft to numerousconsumer goods.(非谓语) It is hard to imagine living a life without thesescientific advancements.（形式主语） To sum up this report, science is less popular than before because the society demands more professionals in other fields such as business and communication.（比较句型+原因状语从句） However I'm convinced that the potentialimplicationsare negative to the health of society, hence requiringrelevantsolutions toreverse the trend. （宾语从句+非谓语） |
| 词汇拓展： | 1. major v. 主修 2. inevitable = inavoidable不可避免的 3. transition = change转变 n. transform v. 转变 4. the era of information 信息时代 5. capital 资金 6. evolvement 进步 7. reflect 反映 8. preference 偏好 9. lose its popularity 不再流行 10. discipline = program= faculty= major专业 n. 11. reverse the trend 扭转潮流 12. risk 冒险 v. 13. gap = difference差距 14. give in= surrender 屈服 15. economic recession 经济萧条期 16. potential= possible 可能的，潜在的 17. enroll 注册入学 18. application 应用 19. afford the consequence 承担结果 20. genetic science 基因科学 21. live on 依靠…生存 22. range from…to… 范围…… 23. energy supply 能源供给 24. consumer goods 消费品 25. scientific advancement 科学进步 26. implication= consequence后果 27. relevant 相关的 28. employment rate 失业率 |
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