2013年1月5日雅思写作大作文点评
日期:2013-01-14 17:12

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  2013年1月5日雅思写作大作文题目

  It has been believed that people who read for pleasure have developed imagination and good language skills than people who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  总所周知,相比于电视,以书为乐更能发展人的想象力个语言能力。同意OR不同意?

  开头段【背景句】

  To spend the spare time, many people are prone to watch TV due to its attractive visual and audio pattern, which undermines the creativity and language capacity in many people’ eyes.

  很多人选择看电视去消遣,因为电视具有吸引力的图像和声音的模式,当然,在很多的人眼里,这样的消遣削弱了人们的创造力和语言技能。

  中间段:reading books can develop the imagination and language skills

  11. Unlike TV programmes, which do not require much imagination since they have presented all pictures, books offer individuals an opportunity to create the unique pictures which reflect their own thought.

  由于电视节目已经把所有的图片都展现出来,所以,它并不需要观赏者有太多的想象,而与此不同,书本能够给人们营造一个拥有自己想象空间的机会。

  2. The authoritative and professional feature is what differentiates the books which can enhance the readers’ writing skills by learning more professional language expressions, from TV sets whose content is limited because it is supposed to cater for all audiences.

  专业性和权威性是区分书本(通过学习专业的语言表达来提高自己的写作能力)和电视(因为要迎合所有观众的口味,所以内容会有所局限)的关键因素。

  中间段2:concession

  Despite the restriction of their content, TV programmes are profitable for development of language skills to some extent. People can learn the pronunciations while watching TV, so that they are likely to link the sound, pictures and words thereby remembering the correct expression more easily. However, reading books is of much great significance when it comes to the formal academic study which needs more technical literacy and profound expression.

  结尾段

  My view is that imagination and language skills cannot be cultivated only by reading books but watching TV, while to be really good in practicing the critical thinking and mastering a language, books are assuredly of greater value.

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重点单词
  • creativityn. 创造力,创造
  • spareadj. 多余的,闲置的,备用的,简陋的 v. 抽出,饶
  • attractiveadj. 有吸引力的,引起注意的
  • uniqueadj. 独一无二的,独特的,稀罕的
  • profitableadj. 有益的,有用的
  • opportunityn. 机会,时机
  • therebyadv. 因此,从而
  • academicadj. 学术的,学院的,理论的 n. 大学教师,
  • enhancevt. 提高,加强,增加
  • technicaladj. 技术的,工艺的