2013年6月英语六级考试作文真题及范文(2)
日期:2013-06-27 17:05

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  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "Good habits result from resisting temptation". You may cite some examples support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
  难度:
  谚语本身的难度大于上一个题目,resist和temptation两个词对部分学生有一定难度,但其实都是四六级词汇啊!!
  思路:
  第一段:开篇引用+深意(这里直接写深意就可以了:生活中充满了各种诱惑,抵御诱惑才能养成好习惯或者我们应该学会抵御诱惑)
  第二段:正能量(抵御诱惑的益处,比如:让我们能专心致志去做更有意义的事情等)+举例(必须要举例!题目要求了。)
  第三段:再次强调抵御诱惑对于培养好习惯很重要+我们自己具体应该怎么做
  范文:
  Good habits, so the proverb has it, result from resisting temptation. Or, to put it another way, in a dazzling world of myriad temptations,one can foster good habits only if his excessive desire is controlled and the temptation is resisted.
  It is easy for those who fail to resist temptation to go astray or get into bad habits under the influence of evil companies. A recent survey reveals that teens smoke, take drugs, and ride with drunk drivers not because they haven't thought about the risks, but because they are tempted by their peers to try new things. By contrast, those who succeed in resisting temptation can always devote themselves to more meaningful things. Take college students for example. Only if we resist the temptation of playing computer games or other meaningless entertainments can we form such good habits as reading, keeping good hours, to name just a few.
  In short, in fostering good habits, nothing can be more important than resisting temptation. Hence, it is essential that schools,educators and parents combine efforts to cultivate young people's ability of telling right from wrong as well as guide them in fostering correct views on life and values. Only in this way can good habits be formed.

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重点单词
  • controlledadj. 受约束的;克制的;受控制的 v. 控制;指挥;
  • excessiveadj. 过多的,过分的
  • surveyv. 调查,检查,测量,勘定,纵览,环视 n. 调查,纵
  • combinev. 结合,联合,使结合 n. 集团,联合企业,联合收割
  • citevt. 引用,引证,举(例)
  • resistv. 抵抗,反抗,抵制,忍住 n. 防蚀涂层
  • cultivatevt. 培养,耕作,栽培,结交(朋友), 促进增长,教养
  • minutesn. 会议记录,(复数)分钟
  • contrastn. 差别,对比,对照物 v. 对比,成对照 [计算机]
  • dazzlingadj. 令人眼花缭乱的,耀眼的 动词dazzle的现在