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2009年12月英语六级考试改错练习 第15期
日期:2009-11-24 17:19

(单词翻译:单击)

改错练习
本期重点:句子结构不完

  比较复杂的复合句最容易出现此类错误,因为句子较长,缺少了某个成分,如主语、谓语、宾语、连词等等。

  考点例析:

  例1: If his aim is inaccurate and he scores a goal, enjoys S3.____the hunter’s triumph of killing his prey.
  解析:这是由一个条件状语从句引导的复合句。但主句只有谓语动词enjoys,缺少主语,因此要步上主语。根据从句的his aim可推断应该加上主语he。

  例2:Nuclear physicists who interested in the structure of 5._________atoms cannot observe protons, electrons and neutrons directly.
  解析:如果将who后面的部分作定语从句,那么它绝少谓语,故将who去掉,此时分词短语interested in直接作定语修饰前面的physicists。或在who后加are,补全定语从句。

  例3:This alliance guarantees that all leprosy patients, even they S6.______are poor, have a right to the most modern treatment.
  解析:even是副词,后面不能直接跟句子,根据句子的意思,应该在even后加if或though。

巩固与拓展

1. A student of music needs as long and as arduous a training
to become a performer a medical student needs to become __________
a doctor.
2. This trip can be found in a booklet, Passport to the Pub:
The Tourists’ Guide to Pub Etiquette, a customers’ code of
conduct for those want to sample "a central part of British ________
life and culture.
3. When a new robot is introduced to a small suburban
factory, a Shinto priest is invited to inaugurate. _________
4. Since the law made easier to get a divorce, the number of __________
divorces has increased.
5. Another changehas been caused by the fact people are _______
living longer nowadays, and many old people live alone
following the death of their partners

综合训练

Many peolpe than ever are drinking coffee these days -- but in small 1.____
quantities than they used to. Some manufacturers of coffee makers are
trying to make advantage of this trend by developing diminutive machines 2.___
that brew(煮)smaller amounts of coffee. Two U.S appliance companies
---Black&Decker, basing in Twson, Maryland, and Toastmaster Inc. 3.___
of Columbia, Missouri ---has recently introduce "drip" Coffee makers that 4.____
brew one or two cup servings of coffee. Neither of the products brew the 5._____
coffee directly into a cup or mug, eliminating the need for a separate
carafe. Since many people make a pot of coffee in the morning and drink 6.____
only a single cup, the new cofee makers should reduce the wasted coffee.
Black&Decker’s Cup-at-a-Time spends $27, while Toastmaster’s Coffee 7.___
Break retails for $20.
Black&Decker also makes a coffee maker drips coffee directly into a 8.____
carry-around thermal carafe. The carafe, a glass vacuum bottle, is supposed
to keep the coffee fresh for hours. The product, called the Thermal Carafe
coffee-maker, comes with a built-in lid that opens during the brewing
process, closes when it is completed. There are several models, including 9.____
one that firs under the counter, ranging from $60 to $110 at price. 10._____ 

参考答案及解析  
巩固与拓展:

  1. 在performer后加as
  此处为同级比较,固定结构为as...as...,而原句比较的对象a medical student前缺少连词as。

  2. want -> wanting或those后加who
  for为介词,后面的宾语时代词those,不可再跟主谓结构。故将want改为wanting,用现在分词短语作定语修饰those,或者在want前加who构成定语从句修饰those.

  3. inaugurate后加it

  4. made后加it
  句子主语是law,谓语是made,easier是宾语补足语,逻辑宾语是to get a divorce,可见此句缺少形式宾语it.

  5. fact后加that
  
fact之后的部分是同位语从句,补充说明fact,其引导词不能省略。

  综合训练

  1. small -> smaller
  
该句后面有than,所以前面应该是smaller。

  2. make -> take
 
 take advantage of 为固定搭配,意思为“利用”,与其同样意思的词组还有make use of。

  3.basing -> based
  
base和它的逻辑主语是被动关系。

  4. has -> have
  
句子的主语是two US appliance companies, 谓语动词要用复数。

  5. Neither -> Both
  
根据文章的中心观点,这里时说两种产品都如何。故要用both

  6. and -> but
  本句的意思应该是:大部分人都是早上煮一壶咖啡 但却只喝一小杯。并列句前后应该是转折关系。

  7. spends -> costs
  
spend的主语必须是人,此处主语是物,应该用cost表示 “该物花费了多少”。

  8. maker 后加that或which
  一个句子在没有连词的情况下不能带有两个谓语,本句的谓语是makes,而drips和之后的部分应该是定语从句修饰coffee maker,又由于先行词在从句中作主语,所以引导词不能省略。

  9. closes前加and
 
 在英语中,用逗号连接两个独立的主谓结构是不对的,所以要在closes前加and。

  10. at -> in
  
表示“在...方面”,使用介词in.

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重点单词
  • diminutiveadj. 小的,小型的,变小的 n. 小的人(物), [
  • vacuumn. 真空,空间,真空吸尘器 adj. 真空的,产生(利
  • samplen. 样品,样本 vt. 采样,取样 adj. 样
  • inaccurateadj. 不准确的,错误的
  • coden. 码,密码,法规,准则 vt. 把 ... 编码,制
  • etiquetten. 礼仪,礼节,成规
  • lidn. 盖,眼睑 vt. 给 ... 装盖子 n.
  • conductn. 行为,举动,品行 v. 引导,指挥,管理 vt.
  • arduousadj. 费力的,辛勤的,险峻的
  • preyn. 被掠食者,牺牲者 vi. 捕食,掠夺,使 ...