(单词翻译:单击)
但大家要记住,不管考查形式怎么变,四级写作的方法永远是万变不离其宗的。
其实,这篇作文只要求大家读懂表格,分析出表格中蕴藏的核心含义和信息就可以了,虽然四六级在开始模仿托福和雅思考试,但评分标准依旧是不变的。因此,我们可以还是套上老师上课讲过的思路和模板,用现象分析型这种题型来应对此次四级作文。
首先,我们可以在第一段,对图表信息稍作分析,得出一个主要的结论。在这一段,记住,我们其实不需要将图表中的每一条信息都解释描述清楚,而只需要进行一个大概地描述,加上少许数据即可。当然,有实力的同学也可以尝试将它逐条描述清楚。例如,作文A卷,图表的核心信息就是向我们说明,学历越高的人周薪也会越高;而作文B卷,图表主要是想告诉我们,学历越高的人失业率便会越低。这些信息,其实也是我们能够通过常识进行判断得出的。那咱们只要搞清楚这一点了,整篇文章围绕这个信息进行展开就顺理成章了。
我们文章第一句话首先描述这幅图是在展示一个什么样的信息。这一点,图的标题就告诉我们了。第二句话,我们就只需要说清楚周薪与学历的这样一个比例关系。第三句话,当然需要列举一两条详细的数据加以说明。在这里我建议大家,最好是选取最大值和最小值进行描写,这也是雅思小作文写作时的惯用手法。好了,至此我们的第一段就顺利完成了,总结起来就是主题句、展开句和举例句这么三句话,这几点内容其实就跟四级常见的现象分析型文章是极其相似的。
既然已经完成了现象的提出,咱们第二段就必须就此现象来分析原因了。当然这一段也是我在课上重点强调、讲解过了的。首先,在结构上,通过总分原则的使用,咱们先完成段落主题句,再分条列举你的原因即可。注意一点,在列举过程中,一定要使用顺序连接词来体现你的逻辑。另外,内容上我们争取所写的原因只要是主流简单和扣题的即可。语言上,争取每一点原因都能使用不同的句式结构或者语言表达,做到语言要多变。
在结尾段,我们可以表达自己的观点看法和提出相应的几点建议。对于这道题目,在第一句话可以写:我认为教育投资是值得的,是有回报的。然后,相应地提出两条课上我们讲过的黄金建议句:第一,有关部门或当局应该加强教育投资;第二,我们学生本身也应该要努力学习,为以后工作打下坚实的基础。最后,来一个典型的结尾句整篇文章就顺利完成了。
所以,大家看看,经过老师的分析,这篇文章虽看似是从未出现过的新题型,但在写法上,咱们依旧可以套用老师上课讲过的模板和句型,将其顺利写完。这也是有些同学在抱怨写作难的时候,而有些同学却反映比较简单的原因所在了,关键看同学们自己会不会进行灵活地融会贯通。
总而言之,本次作文可以说是作文考查旧目标下的一种新形式,如此的考试对学生的英语写作能力提出的新的要求,首先要读懂图表才能理解,才能解释,而在解释的过程中任何语言的失误都会造成输出的偏差,进而造成表义失效。因此,希望同学们在以后的英语学习中注重加强自身的写作实力,对写作这部分有自己的理解和把握,而不仅仅只是依赖模板。只有这样,才能在不断前进和发展的四六级考试中游刃有余,获得满意的分数。
最后,在这里老师选取了两篇范文,仅供大家参考:
2012年12月英语四级作文A范文
Education Pays
The above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that one with higher education background earns more money weekly than those with lower ones. For instance, the college students with no degree get paid $712 per week whereas those with a Bachelor’s degree can earn $1038.
Several reasons, in my opinion, can be identified to account for this phenomenon. To begin with, compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which are essential to a high-income work. Also, the higher one’s education degree is, the bigger platform he will enjoy to show his ability. For example, his college, university, or research institute will organize various job fairs for him to communicate face to face with employers.
This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore, substantial education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to build our country and strive for better lives for ourselves.
2012年12月英语四级作文B范文
Education Pays
The above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that unemployment rate of those with higher education background is much lower than those with lower education degree. For instance, the unemployment rate of college students with no degree is as high as 14.9% while that of those with doctoral degree is only 1.9%.
The following reason, in my opinion, is the most important one to account for this phenomenon. Compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which make them more qualified and competent for their task. Thus, they are less likely to lose their jobs.
This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore, education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to avoid unemployment.