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新东方名师点评 2012年(上)四级作文考试
日期:2012-08-02 14:04

(单词翻译:单击)

关于作文类型是2011年12月那样的全英文要求的作文,还是传统汉语提纲+英文题目的作文类型,笔者认为两种均有可能:几率各占50%,个人倾向于回归传统命题方式:即英语题目+汉语提纲。

但相同的话题重复可能性不大,2011年12月话题均涉及到“成功”,因此,今年2012年6月与“成功”直接相关的话题可能性不大。

有几个万能句,首先进行背诵,考试肯定能写上。

现象描述万能句:In contemporary society, it has become a trend for _____ to _______.

中间段:

As a vital quality/ awareness/ virtue/ part of life, _____ brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for life, and helps us to _____.

It is _____ that enables _____ to build up _______.

尾段:

(建议)Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates (not) to _______

(展望未来)If we try our utmost to do so, the future of _____will be promising, hopeful and rosy.

第一部分:全英文作文

1. 乐观

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Optimism is the Road to a Promising Future by commenting on the Tagore’ saying, "If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you will also miss the stars." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Optimism is the Road to a Promising Future

Our history has been filled with a variety of enlightening sayings, and the following is no exception: if you shed tears when you miss the sun, you will also miss the stars. This remark can be naturally associated with the significance of optimism: if one intends to witness a promising future, it is advisable for him to be optimistic.

历史上有很多发人深省的话语,下面这个就不例外:“如果你为错过太阳而流泪,那么你可能还会错过星星。”该评论使人很自然地联想到乐观的重要性:假如一个人想要看到光明的未来,他最好应该保持乐观。

Optimism is the key to success in all fields of activity, and it can be likened to the road to a promising future. (排比句:重点背三个动词:bring, arouse, help)First, as a vital psychological quality, optimism brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for work, and helps us overcome difficulties. (强调句式:一定能写)Second, it is optimistic attitude that enables people to build up confidence, hope and courage. (所有作文万能句)As a matter of fact, successful people in mounting numbers have come to realize the necessity of optimism in life, work and study.

乐观是各行各业成功的关键,而且它可以被比作通向光明未来的道路。首先,作为一种极其重要的心态,乐观会带给我们极大的动力,让我们对工作充满热情、帮助我们战胜困难。同时,正是一种乐观的心态使得人们积累了自信,希望和勇气。事实上,成功人士们早已经意识到乐观在生活工作和学习中的必要性。

(观点)As a college student, I am firmly convinced that optimism is the road to success. (建议:一定写上)Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to cultivate optimism.( 如果字数不够:结尾展望未来:If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our life will be hopeful, promising and rosy.) (223 words)

作为一名大学生,我坚信乐观就是成功之路。因此,我们应该鼓励、倡导和支持朋友和同学们去培养乐观精神。 (假如我们能尽最大努力这样做,未来生活一篇美好。)

第一篇作文可以写如下话题:A strong will(11年12月), confidence, cooperation or teamwork, courage, patience, practice(97年),a good preparation(11年12月六级主题),perseverance, modesty, diligence, unity, knowledge, sense of happiness, punctuality, a willing heart, 志愿者精神(volunteers)互助(mutual help)创新精神(innovation)

第二部分:提纲式作文

一、慈善机构公信力

My View on Charity

1.近年,部分慈善机构或个人受到批评质疑

2.出现这种现象原因(重点背诵段)

3.我的看法

Charity brings the society power, arouses people’s enthusiasm for life, and help others to overcome difficulties. However, after several scandals, it has become a trend for the public to criticize and doubt charity organizations or individuals. A case in point is China Red Cross, whose fame was spoiled by Guo Meimei.

It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. In the first place, the disordered charity management is the root cause of criticism. Why? Charity organizations in mounting/ large numbers have not come to realize the problems in their management, budget and raising money. In the second place, the lack of public’s trust constitutes another major cause. Based on a survey on the Internet, because of some negative cases, a majority of people admit that they are unwilling to donate or help others through charitable activities or organizations.

As a college student, I am firmly convinced that it is exceedingly necessary for the public to be involved in charity. However, we should advocate and encourage organizations to reform charitable activities. (174)

二、退休制

Should Retirement Age Be Postponed?

1.近年来,推迟退休年龄引发人们热议

2.推迟退休年龄有利也有弊

3.我的看法

Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admit that aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.

A number of individuals favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough work-force. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view that postponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.

I am convinced that we should balance old people’ interest and this aging society. Thus, if those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’ life will be promising, hopeful and rosy. (187 words)

三、幸福感

How to Enhance the Sense of Happiness

1.人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法

2.幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面,也指。。。

The sense of happiness is of great significance. As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future. However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.

In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects. Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love. Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness. It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.

As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness. To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability. (168 words)

四、 大学生电子设备

Are Advanced Electronic Products Necessary for College Students?

1. 如今,大学生谱表拥有较高级电子设备,如智能手机,电子词典等

2. 对此人们看法不一

3. 我的看法

On many campuses, it has become a prevalent trend for college students to use various advanced electronic products. Taking a look around, we can find a great many products like this: smart cell phones, E-dictionaries and so on.

A number of individuals favor college students’ using these pieces of equipment. To begin with, as necessary products, they can bring college students more convenience, arouses their awareness of keeping up with IT development. In addition, it is these advanced products that enable students to build up their speed and efficiency. Even so, others hold a different view. First, according to a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of students admit that an iPhone is exceedingly expensive for them. Second, students in mounting numbers have come to realize that advanced products are based on their parents' hard work.

As a college student, I am convinced that not all students should purchase these high-tech and expensive products. However, we should advocate and encourage friends and classmates to buy, if they earn money by themselves . (175 words)

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重点单词
  • vitaladj. 至关重要的,生死攸关的,有活力的,致命的
  • enhancevt. 提高,加强,增加
  • stressn. 紧张,压力 v. 强调,着重 vt. 强调 n.
  • willingadj. 愿意的,心甘情愿的
  • minutesn. 会议记录,(复数)分钟
  • charityn. 慈善,慈善机关(团体), 仁慈,宽厚
  • entitledadj. 有资格的,已被命名的 动词entitle的过去
  • advocaten. 提倡者,拥护者,辩护者,律师 v. 主张,提倡
  • optimismn. 乐观,乐观主义
  • adequatelyadv. 足够地,充分地,适当地