文都徐可风点评:按考前预测方式写的考场参考范文
日期:2012-06-16 11:38

(单词翻译:单击)

四级写作这次还是出得没什么新意,还是结合生活的细节事情来命题,考“过度包装”。其实徐可风认为这也怪不了命题的兄弟,毕竟四六级的命题也就是那些套路了,用多了,自然就很难再创新了。“过度包装”这种现象可风倒是常常看到,例如朋友中秋送的月饼啊,那月饼盒包装得比无比奢华,比骨灰盒还奢华。
命题还是按照“描述现象”、“分析原因”、“建议措施”这老掉牙的三板斧,尽管老套,那也是“斧斧”生辉。(突然看到韩国再次扣押我国渔船的新闻,先鄙视一下)考前的YY里已经把最有效的方式给了大家,就照写吧。昨天微博再次针对具体写作的思路内容给出了建议,不负众望,也有部分内容命中。
下面徐可风就结合考前YY给出的模式,加上考前徐可风微博的预测内容,按照四级阅卷要求,写一份符合四级阅卷要求的的考场参考文章,以供参考。关注文都关注徐可风的童鞋,在看这篇文章时,相信你会有似曾相似的感觉的。
On Excessive Packaging

① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country.
② It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers.
③ And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging.


① There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
② For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself.
③ For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging.
④ But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon.


① In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it.
② The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging.
③ Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision on excessive packaging.
④ In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably.

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重点单词
  • widespreadadj. 分布(或散布)广的,普遍的
  • supervisionn. 监督,管理
  • effectiveadj. 有效的,有影响的
  • irrationaln. 无理数 adj. 无理性的,不合理的
  • primeadj. 最初的,首要的,最好的,典型的 n. 青春,壮
  • strengthenv. 加强,变坚固
  • negativeadj. 否定的,负的,消极的 n. 底片,负数,否定
  • concernedadj. 担忧的,关心的
  • additionn. 增加,附加物,加法
  • emphasizevt. 强调,着重