评分标准

前言：

各位可可网的网友大家好，从今天开始可可网推出了一档栏目“2009年四级考试集训队”，我们会为参加今年四级考试的同学认真搜集学习资料、考试最新动态以及相关的热点问题。另外，我们会在茫茫入海的信息中去粗取精，为您打造一份最有效的学习资料，让您不仅一次性通过而且在考试中取得高分。希望大家能够跟随可可网进行有计划的长期学习。最后，感谢大家对可可网的支持。祝大家在新学习中取得好成绩，顺利通过四级考试！

2009年2月27日

训练科目：评分标准及常见错误

俗话说不打无准备之仗，对于大多数参加四级考试的同学都没认真学习过四六级考试的评分标准，甚至有些同学都没听说过，只有极少数“有心人”才会在准备考试之初认真阅读评分标准，有的放矢的学习。在参加四六级考试中我们常常会发现，有些同学的英语基础平时不怎么好，但是参加英语考试总是能顺利通过，追其原因，只有他们心里最清楚，那就是——有的放矢，投其所好。作为一名大学生，我想几乎所有人都有过“考前突击”的经历，其实考前突击的过程就是一个“有的放矢，投其所好”的过程。我们复习重点，查找以前的试卷，从中挖掘出老师喜欢考什么样的题目，有针对性的学习，常常能达到事半功倍的效果。

四六级考试也仅仅是一门教育部组织的全国性考试，也同样有它的喜好和重点。所以，大家要把考前突击的那套方法拿出来，有针对性的学习，经过一段时间你会发现四六级考试其实是“小菜一碟”。

今天我们的内容就是看清，四六级考试作文的评分标准，提高学习效率，只学有用的。另外还有一些考试中经常犯的错误，希望跟我们学习的同学，从一开始就深刻认识这些错误，养成正确、良好的写作习惯。和我们一起训练一段时间你会发现，其实四六级作文一点也不难！

现在开始我们今天的内容：

评分标准：

　　2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

　　5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

　　8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

　　11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。?

　　14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。)

常见错误上

一.主语错误

1. 主语缺失

错：In our country feels very free.
改：People feel free in our country.

错：In my hometown aren’t very busy.
改：People in my hometown are very busy.

2. 非名词主语

错：Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.
改：Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.

错：Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
改：Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.

3. 主谓错位

错：Reading books can acquire knowledge
改：People can acquire knowledge from books.

错：Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.
改：Now people can’t do without TV.

二.谓语错误

1. 多重谓语

错：In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.
改：In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks.

错：Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad.
改：Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.

2. 非动词谓语

错：Some people firmly agree, but others against it.改：Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.
错：It is said that the place worths touring.改：It is said that the place is worth touring.

3. 主谓不一致

错：I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.
改：I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.

错：I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.
改：I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..

4. 误用词组

错：They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.
改：They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.

错：I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.
改：I am afraid that it’s going to rain.

常见错误中

三.冠词错误

错：In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.
改：In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising.

错：They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.
改：They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.

四.代词错误

1. 偷梁换柱

错：An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.
改：An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.

错： If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.
改：If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.

2. 指代不明

错：He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.
改：He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.

错：Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
改：Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.

五.形容词、副词错误

错：What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.
改：What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.

错：Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.
改：Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.

常见错误下

六.分词误用

错：Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.
改：Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

错：Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.
改：Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.

七.修饰语误置

错：Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.
改：Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.

错：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
改：To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

八.垂悬修饰语

错：Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.
改：Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.

错：To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.
改：To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.

九.平行错误

错：While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.
改：While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.

错：Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.
改：Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.

十.搭配错误

错:In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
改:In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.

错:Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.
改:Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

十一.破句

错：Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.
改：Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.

错：First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.
改：First you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important.

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