商务英语(BEC)高级写作模拟题及答案(1)
日期:2009-04-24 11:46

(单词翻译:单击)

使用定工色牌将公司向你布置的简短工作任务与你实际投入的工作时间的状况做一比较,写一份200-250个字的报告。描述你的比较结果,并提出必要的改进建议。考虑以下几个方面的问题。
  *报告标题
  *每段小标题和内容
  *每段中的常用词语。

  参考答案


  左图:
  Job Brief
  20% Green
  30% Orange
  50% Yellow

  右图
  How is actually spent
  5% White
  10% grey
  15% pink
  20% green
  20% orange
  30% yellow

  Reassessment of job description: Sue Pearson(PR Dept.)

  Introduction
  This report sets out to use WorkSet colours to assess the accuracy of my job description as PR Officer and to suggest a nomber of changes.

  Findings
  It is clear that there is a difference between the way company views the job and the reality as I perceive it. Firstly, a number of areas which demand a significant proportion of my time are not mentioned in the official job brief. The segment on the pie chart which provides most cause for concern is the pink sector;this relates to my attendance at a number of meetings to which I can contribute little. Another significant area is the grey segment; this refers to the unscheduled time which I spend sorting out computer problems. I feel that these activities are hampering my core work.As can be seen from the pie charts, the time I spend actively working to meet the goals agreed with my line manager is less than envisaged.

  Conclusions
  The above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.

  Recommendations
  I would recommend that my official job brief should be updated using the WorkSet colours. It would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart and to investigate whether work in these areas could be carried out by someone else more suited to thesr tasks.

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重点单词
  • accuracyn. 准确(性), 精确度
  • perceivevt. 察觉,感觉,认知,理解
  • indicatev. 显示,象征,指示 v. 指明,表明
  • currentn. (水、气、电)流,趋势 adj. 流通的,现在的,
  • proportionn. 比例,均衡,部份,(复)体积,规模 vt. 使成比
  • descriptionn. 描写,描述,说明书,作图,类型
  • segmentn. 部份,瓣,弓形 vt. 分割
  • contributevt. 捐助,投稿 vi. 投稿,贡献,是原因之一
  • reassessmentn. 重新评估
  • assessv. 估定,评定