商务英语BEC2014年高级写作范文:1
日期:2015-02-27 17:57

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Report writing Ex 4:

Sample answer: (235words)
Reassessment of job satisfaction: SuePearson(PR Dept.)


Introduction
This report sets out to use Workset colours toassess the accuracy of my job description as PRofficer and to suggest a number of changes.
Findings
It is clear that there is a difference between theway the company views the job and the reality as I perceive it. Firstly, a number of areas whichdemand a significant proportion of my time are not mentioned in the official job brief. Thesegment on the pie chart which provides most cause for concern is the pink sector; this relatesto my attendance at a number of meetings which I can contribute little. Another significantarea is the grey segment; this refers to the unscheduled time I spend sorting out computerproblems. I feel these activities are hampering my core work. As can be seen from the piecharts, the time I spend actively working to meet the goals agreed with my line manager is lessthan envisaged.
Conclusions
The above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.
Recommendations
I would recommend that my official job brief should be updated using the Workset colours.It would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart andto investigate whether work in these areas could be carried out by someone else more suitedto these tasks.

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重点单词
  • coren. 果心,核心,要点 vt. 挖去果核
  • proportionn. 比例,均衡,部份,(复)体积,规模 vt. 使成比
  • currentn. (水、气、电)流,趋势 adj. 流通的,现在的,
  • satisfactionn. 赔偿,满意,妥善处理,乐事,确信
  • reassessmentn. 重新评估
  • accuracyn. 准确(性), 精确度
  • valuableadj. 贵重的,有价值的 n. (pl.)贵重物品
  • segmentn. 部份,瓣,弓形 vt. 分割
  • inaccurateadj. 不准确的,错误的
  • contributevt. 捐助,投稿 vi. 投稿,贡献,是原因之一