托福分类话题写作每日一练 第124期
日期:2012-11-28 13:30

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124. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

参考分析:

不能同意。

  • 这是个没有答案的比较(it is a meaningless comparison; it is a comparison without definite answer)。学习历史文学确实很重要,但是说比学习科学数学更重要就没有什么道理了。
  • 对不同的人,有不同的重要标准。
  • 建立自己的立场:所有的人都应该具备最基础的知识。

124、不同意读文学和历史要比科学和数学重要
(1)科学和数学是每天都要用的,非常重要。比如说计算自己的生活费等等
(2)科学和数学是工作中的必须。比如说工作中的计算机知识等等
(3)科学和数学给人另外一种思维方式,这对于未来发展很有利

Topic 124 Social science vs. natural science

The chances of receiving education are considered the most fundamental right of human beings in the 21st century. Naturally, the argument about what the students should acquire at schools has attracted many attentions from people of various walks of life. In considering the obligatory courses required at schools, people have different ideas. Some would hold the view that it is more important for students to study science and mathematics than it is for them to study history and literature.

I agree with this point of view completely. Although both social and natural science courses play an important role in the whole education system, natural science seems to have a greater impact on human progress. Our society is developing at a high speed quite unprecedented before. One cannot deny the fact that all of these results came directly from scientific discoveries. An example is that during the period of industrial revolution, it is science and mathematics that brought many inventions and discoveries such as assembly lines, mending machines and electric appliances which has freed the most of people from manual labors once and for all.

The above reason I pointed out does not mean that literature and history cannot improve people's lives but they have few advantages to people's material life especially to those poor people who are still struggling for the essential needs of shelters and foods. Literature and history cannot be put into practice to some extent. Research and development of science and mathematics on the contrary can be applied to our real life and improve our living standard. Take medical science for example, the new findings of treatments of certain diseases can save lives of many people. There still exist some fatal diseases that threaten people's lives. All this will depend on the development of medical science.

In short, all courses involving literature and history, science and mathematics are necessary and important to students. However, according to the reasons I discussed above, I want to make the judgment that science and mathematics course are more useful.

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重点单词
  • comparisonn. 比较
  • threatenv. 威胁,恐吓
  • socialadj. 社会的,社交的 n. 社交聚会
  • obligatoryadj. 强制性的,义务的,必须的
  • fataladj. 致命的,毁灭性的,决定性的
  • definiteadj. 明确的,确切的,有把握的
  • revolutionn. 革命,旋转,转数
  • acquirevt. 获得,取得,学到
  • impactn. 冲击(力), 冲突,影响(力) vt. 挤入,压紧
  • applicationn. 应用; 申请; 专心 n. 应用软件程序