托福分类话题写作每日一练 第50期
日期:2012-08-09 12:57

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50. Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

参考分析:

讨论两种attitudes各自的好处。然后在不同的情况下,选择不同的态度。比如:

  • 锻炼身体有很多种方法,如果我已经习惯了慢跑,只要能够达到身体健康的目的,就不必要花时间练习一些其他的体育项目了。
  • 放松的时候可以听听音乐——往往是同一首歌或曲子已经听了很多年。但是看电影,却很难做到重复看同一个电影几百遍。

50、我选择做一些新的事情和冒险
(1)做新的事情和冒险对自己是一个挑战。感受这个过程能够让人变的更成熟
(2)做新的事情和冒险能够学习新的东西,丰富自己的知识
(3)做新的事情和冒险可以结识更多的朋友

Topic 50 Do same things vs. try new things

When asked about the approaches to life, many people have the idea that change and new experiences bring us a meaningful life. However, others take the view that staying the same and not changing the usual habits is the better way of the life. In fact both approaches have its advantages and disadvantages, which are listed as follows.

Some people believe change and new experiences provide us a meaningful life because when we adapt to the change and new environments, we must face the difficulties and try our bests to overcome them. This process not only builds our personality, but also gives us an exciting and meaningful life. What's more, the change around us improves our spirit of adaptation and independence. They benefit us in competing for survival in the society. Let us suppose we always stay the same and do not change the environment. Then if someday we have to step into another environment, how can we adapt to it?

On the other hand, people who hold an opposite view consider that sticking to the usual habits is the better way to life. They point out that the longer you keep the same habits, the more adaptive you are and you may live comfortably. They point out that usual changes make you acquaint with nothing, and then it is impossible for you to have a happy life. In order to see this point clearly, they give us a good example: If you change your environment every month, you have to always change your habits and customs. Then how can you live happily?

As far as I am concerned, the advantages of change carry more weight than those of staying the same because I need to improve my adaptation. Only in this way, can I survive in the society.

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重点单词
  • impossibleadj. 不可能的,做不到的 adj. 无法忍受的
  • adaptationn. 改编,改编成的作品,适应
  • survivevt. 比 ... 活得长,幸免于难,艰难度过 vi.
  • adaptvt. 使适应,改编 vi. 适应,适合
  • independencen. 独立,自主,自立
  • applicationn. 应用; 申请; 专心 n. 应用软件程序
  • concernedadj. 担忧的,关心的
  • specificadj. 特殊的,明确的,具有特效的 n. 特效药,特性
  • survivaln. 生存,幸存者
  • adaptiveadj. 适合的,适应的,能适应的