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2015年2月7日雅思写作解析及语料库
2015年2月7日雅思写作回忆:
Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists,not local people,why is this case and what can be done to attract local people? 对于很多博物馆和历史遗迹而言,参观者多为外地游客,而非本地人,原因何在,如何吸引当地人?
原创范文赏析:
首段:背景介绍 + 写作目的
Many cities are famous for their unique landscape such as various eye-catching historical sites or worldly acclaimed museums. However, a hard truth is that those hot scenic spots are often appreciated by visitors from other provinces or countries,yet,seldom visited by locals. This essay aims to explore why local people are reluctant to pay a visit to local places of interest and present some recommendations on how to encourage local residents to generate interest in appreciating local museums and historic sites.
翻译:很多城市以美丽的旅游资源而著名,但是,一个事实却是:当地人很少去热门的旅游景区参观,外地游客才是这些景区的常客,本文中,我将会努力探究下为何当地人不喜欢参观地方旅游资源,再提出一些建议,鼓励地方人欣赏当地艺术馆和历史古迹。
解析:famous = worldly acclaimed 世界著名的
解析:landscape = view 景色
解析:visitors from other provinces or countries 外地游客
解析:are reluctant to = are unwilling to do sth 不愿意做……
解析:local residents = locals = local people 地方人
解析:visit = pay a visit to = appreciate 欣赏;参观
二段:当地人不愿意参观博物馆和历史遗迹的原因
First,familiarity breeds boredom. Actually, as for the vast majority of sightseers,the aim of exploring a new city is to feel her special cultural deposits or to appreciate the museums that are exclusive to the city,however,on the part of local people, they seldom have the mood to appreciate indigenous scenery because mental pleasure or visual enjoyment are more likely to be brought about by the unknown. Further,the incredibly expensive ticket might pose another barrier for some local residents. Many outsiders,in most cases,have sufficient tourism budget and endless vigor to appreciate tourist attractions. Conversely,some locals’ wonderful wish of visiting nearby scenery might be handicapped by their limited financial budget.For example,Beijing is noted for the Great Wall, The National Palace Museum and many other historical sites. Nonetheless,numerous native people fail to feel the wonder, beauty or amusing workmanship on site with their own eyes.
翻译:第一,熟悉的地方没有景色,游客旅行的目的就是去探究一个陌生城市,感受其文化底蕴或者欣赏其特有的博物馆,但是,对于很多地方人而言,他们很少有心情去欣赏本地的景色,因为,视觉享受和精神的愉悦也许更多由探究未知的世界而带来。第二,大多数旅游的人都是拥有更充足的钱和无穷精力去专门欣赏旅游景区,但是在旅游胜地城市当中的人并不一定有充足的条件去享受,北京就是很好的例证。
拓展:conversely = by contrast = on the contrary 相反的是
拓展:is noted for = is famous for 因为……而出名··
拓展:view = landscape = scenery n 风景
解析:mental pleasure or visual enjoyment 精神愉悦和视觉享受
解析:pose a barrier for 构成障碍
解析:many outsiders 很多外地游客
解析:The National Palace Museum 故宫博物馆
三段:解决策略:增加娱乐元素;设立免费开放日;加强宣传
As to how to inspire local people to visit adjacent historic sites or museums,several measures should be adopted. First, as for many modern people, the aim of their pastime is mainly for enjoyment not for receiving education. So,a museum will be less attractive if it lacks some humorous or delightful elements. In this sense, adding some entertaining elements is a good way to attract more visitors. To open a theater in the museum, or to organize some theme visit activities might be good suggestions. Also,it is preferable and feasible to carry out the free-admission policy on some special days so that more locals can be allowed to enter the museums to enjoy the displays or to feel the historic sites freely. Last, efforts should be made by the mass media to strengthen the publicity of local tourist attractions, and relevant introduction on the city’s unique history is an effective way to kindle the readers’ interest to visit those museums or historic sites on their own
翻译:关于如何鼓励地方人欣赏当地的旅游资源,我们可以采取几个策略:第一,现代人娱乐的目的是感受快乐不是接受教育,因此,增加一些幽默的或者令人愉悦的元素是很好的方式吸引当地人。例如,博物馆中开始小型电影院,或者组织一些主题参观活动。第二,一些特殊的日子,可作为免费开放日,地方人可以免费欣赏艺术馆和历史遗迹。最后,每天应该努力加强关于地方旅游资源的宣传。这是很好的方式激发人们参观艺术馆和历史古迹的热情。
解析:as to how to do sth 关于如何去……
解析:adjacent = nearby 附近的;临近的
解析:it is preferable and feasible to do 做……是可取的可行的
解析:in person = on one’s own 亲自地
解析:efforts should be made by the mass media to strengthen the publicity of 媒体应该做出努力去加强关于……的宣传
拓展:kindle one’s interest = generate one’s zeal 激发兴趣;激发热情
尾段:再次亮明观点 + 总结理由:
In closing, my stand is that to ignite the locals’ interest, to implement some free-admission policy and to strengthen the publicity will all have indispensable role to play in increasing the numbers of the native visitors for both museums and historic sites.
翻译:激发当地人的兴趣;实行免费政策;加强宣传都在增加地方人游览艺术馆和古迹方面发挥了不可缺少的作用。
原创旅行语料库:
1. go traveling in sp = do some sightseeing in sp 在某地旅行
2. local people = indigenous people = local residents = the local 地方人
3. outsiders = visitors from other provinces or countries 外地游客
4. visit the places of interest = visit the tourist attractions 参观旅游景区
5. museums and art galleries 博物馆或者艺术馆
6. historic sites 历史古迹
7. The National Palace Museum 故宫博物馆
8. The Museum of Imperial Palace of Manchu State 伪皇宫博物馆
9. intrigue one’s interest of doing sth 激发某人做……的兴趣
10. kill one’s interest = dampen one’s interest 扼杀兴趣
11. strengthen the publicity of …… 加强对于…… 的宣传
12. attract the attendance of the locals 吸引当地人的参与
13. in this essay,I will endeavor to explore the reasons why some local people fail to …… 本文中,我会努力探究下为何一些地方人未能够……
14. enable sb to do sth = empower sb to do sth v 使某人有机会做……
15. magnetize = attract v 吸引……
16. be less alluring to the local 对于地方人没有吸引力
17. feel bored about 对于……没有新鲜感
18. intrigue the zeal of the local residents 激发当地居民的热情
19. lowing the ticket prices is a feasible solution to attract more indigenous people 降低票价是一个有效的方式吸引更多的当地人
20. provide locals with more colorful and diverse entertainment activities 给当地人提供丰富的多样的娱乐活动
写作感言:写作范文就是功夫在诗外,积累在点滴。因为每一次的考试周报我都写范文,所以,刀子越磨越快,武功越练越高,可能,我们冥思苦想出了论据和例证,英文写作却遇到瓶颈,但是,只要,主动积累了新的表达法就是写作的提升,雅思写作,已经很难原题压中,多是现场完成原创文本,练笔和积累无比重要。