2013年12月21日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文
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2013年12月21日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文

Scientists advise people to live a healthy lifestyle, but millions of people still continue with unhealthy activities.
Why and what can we do to change this situation?

题目讲解:

题型类别:报告类(起因、影响及措施)
题材类别:社会类话题(生活方式)
考情分析及2014年1月份展望:
继12月14号涉及原因分析的写作话题之后,本场考试依然为报告类题型。针对即将到来的1月份考试,建议大家重点熟悉议论类和报告类文章写作框架和构思方法,多练习不同话题的语言素材,做到考场上灵活应对。
与本场考试话题类似的旧题有:
Some people think it is the respoasibility for government to ensure that people have healthy lifestyles. Others think people should have a free for their own lifestyles decisions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ( 2008.03.29)
参考思路(针对不同人群有不健康生淸方式进行分析)》
不健康生活方式的原因:
1.媒体过度渲染以瘦为美的观念导致女性饮食紊乱,比如盲目节食;
2.工作量的增大使上班族长期久坐,没有闲暇时间参与体育锻炼;
3-科技进步使人们与电脑如胶似漆,尤其是年轻人,很容易沉迷网络游戏。
解决措施:
1.媒体报道应该被审查;媒体应倡导健康的生活方式;
2.政府和企业建立合作关系,加大对公共运动设施的投入,让人们更多参与体育运动的机会。

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参考范文:

As public health declines alarmingly, the significance of making smarter and wiser decisions lias been increasingly recognized. Although leading a healthy lifestyle becomes a valued concept, multitudes of people stick with their unhealthy choices. Therefore,possible contributory causes of this pressing phenomenon and corresponding measures will be explored and put forward.
Admittedly, getting nd of unhealthy habits is far from effortless. First and foremost, the mass media overexposes the public to portrayals of “ideal” body types and is a real culprit. To be specific, fashions magazines, TV programmes and advertisements tend to glorify a slender body shape of females, thus exaggerating the importance of appearances in general. It is therefore not uncommon that many vulnerable school-age girls, influenced by diet products campaigns, are afflicted with eating disorders. Secondly, an increased workload should also be held accountable. In this regard, due to a hectic work schedule, many white-collar workers have to lead a sedentary lifestyle, being deprived of their spare time to go the gytn regularly. Consequently, m order to save time and energy, these people are more likely to rely on fast food, wdiich contains considerable amount of sugar and fat. Last but not least, technological innovations have also distracted people from engagement in harmless relaxations and keep them glued to computer screens. For instance, many youngsters get easily indulged in online games and could probably fall victim to game addiction, which may,in a long tenn, lead to diminishing academic performance and social isolation.
In the face of undesirable impacts brought by an unhealthy lifestyle, remedies are needed for individuals and society as a whole. For one thing, appropriate media censorship could be implemented. Various media are advised to campaign for a healthy lifestyle and encourage people from all walks of life to participate m outdoor activities. For another, partnership can be established between the government and enterprises and a joint effort can be flirther made to increase the number of public sports facilities, offering residents m both rural and urban areas more opportunities to get involved in regular exercise.
In brief based on the aforementioned analysis, the media coverage, a heavy workload, and enticing technological advancements are to be blamed for this disturbing phenomenon. Nevertheless, there are potentially effective measures to alleviate their adverse impacts.

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重点单词
  • censorshipn. 检查制度
  • engagementn. 婚约,订婚,约会,约定,交战,雇用,(机器零件等)
  • victimn. 受害者,牺牲
  • consequentlyadv. 所以,因此
  • conceptn. 概念,观念
  • urbanadj. 城市的,都市的
  • establishedadj. 已被确认的,确定的,建立的,制定的 动词est
  • phenomenonn. 现象,迹象,(稀有)事件
  • specificadj. 特殊的,明确的,具有特效的 n. 特效药,特性
  • enticingadj. 迷人的;引诱的 v. 引诱;诱骗(entice